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Ocean's Song

Whispers drowned by ocean's sound seagulls flying, space abound, oceanic scent within the air dance of waves in all its flair. Somnambulant shadows under moonlit skies castaway's drunken delirium misty morning's stare sunrise. Silent murmurs, majestic surrounding never ending, green-blue's, white spume. beautiful and powerful language. Silence, don't say a word, I need to hear the ocean's song.

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Rev. Dr. Samuel Mack Oms Dd

Date: 12/14/2015 12:36:00 PM

Tanya I love all your poems they are very, very beautiful and this is my fav as it reminds me of how God speaks to us as a whisper of the ocean God's blessings lots of love and payers to you always and I pray you Have a very, very Marry Christmas and As we know it to be true this is every bodies Special Day pours as well as God has given us many things in this life and He give us His son Jesus a wonderful caring, loving man and I personally thank God for Him AMEN!!

Thomas Carney

Date: 12/14/2015 10:01:00 AM

Tanya I enjoyed this piece. You mention free verse but you metered down nicely on the 1st stave and last line, with as in perfect iambic tetrameter. The first stanza had trochaic tetrameter [catalexis] which was cool, and line three was pentameter [catalexis] . You might have thought you "lucked" out but it is a gift. Not many people can just write this was naturally, so I applaud you.

Sajid Mehmood
Date: 10/16/2017 2:51:00 PM

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Constance La France

Date: 6/16/2015 9:02:00 PM

Tanya, your poem is beautifully penned and has a dreamy quality, welcome to poetry soup and thanks for visiting my poem, my cloud

Sajid Mehmood
Date: 10/16/2017 2:53:00 PM

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/15/2015 9:39:00 PM

Hi Tanya, welcome to PoetrySoup and I hope to read much more of your wonderful work! This piece is so lovely and the imagery is awesome! It deserves a "7!" Warmest regards. Pandita