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Oceanic Scene

ripples of  blue ebb

               as ocean pebbles crumble--

                                   washing summer out





Tania Kitchin's Ocean Waves Haiku Contest
1/27/2019

oceansummerhaiku

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Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

March 27, 2019 at 6:43 PM

Beautiful imagery.

Susan Ashley

February 12, 2019 at 11:48 AM

The softly shining beauty and artistry of your poetry never fails to to leave me in awe, Nette. Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTD honors. Warmest wishes always, dear poetess. ~Susan

Connie Marcum Wong

February 3, 2019 at 5:44 PM

I love the subtle beauty in this lovely haiku Nette. Congratulations on having it honored for POTD! : ) xxoo

Valerie Staton

February 3, 2019 at 4:40 PM

Nicely written. Thoroughly enjoyed reading.

Silent One

February 2, 2019 at 7:16 AM

Great imagery Nette.. Congrats on POTD..

Duke Beaufort

February 1, 2019 at 4:17 AM

Yes, it's cold now, and I am hopeful spring will come. Climate change is causing the polar vortex to lose containment, and we are suffering a bit. Ugh!!

Sara Kendrick

January 31, 2019 at 4:39 PM

Congrats on your winning work. Very creative indeed. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Robert Lindley

January 31, 2019 at 8:19 AM

Congratulations my great friend on this superbly crafted haiku being honored with POTD honors here at the Soup....

Don Standeford

January 30, 2019 at 8:15 PM

Nice, especially for such a compact form.

Andrea Dietrich

January 30, 2019 at 6:40 PM

I love this, Nette!! Congrats for your win.

Brandy Nicole

January 30, 2019 at 1:31 PM

Your thoughts touch the page with such elegance and grace. This is beautiful. Congratulations nette, on Poem of the Day. On this win as well. :) Brandy

Arthur Vaso

January 30, 2019 at 12:54 PM

I missed this, beautiful and congrats on POTD!!!

P.S. Awtry

January 30, 2019 at 12:06 PM

What a lovely POTD! Congratulations Nette :)

Constance La France

January 30, 2019 at 12:00 PM

Nette, congratulations on having your beautiful poem selected as POTD, enjoy the honor~

Joseph May

January 30, 2019 at 10:06 AM

Wonderful write Nette..Congrats on POTD..

Sunlite Wanter

January 30, 2019 at 9:49 AM

Congratulations! Lovely image.

Alexis Y.

January 30, 2019 at 9:31 AM

Hi Nette, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on getting the poem of day. It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Winged Warrior

January 30, 2019 at 8:55 AM

Congrats!!! nette on your POTD!!...lovely surfing my friend...love & light...^WW^

Vladislav Raven

January 30, 2019 at 8:48 AM

Hi Nette, a wonderful Haiku painting a wonderful image. Congratulations on your well-deserved Poem Of The Day honour with this wonderful write. Goes into my Haiku faves. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Hugs....Mike. XX