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Oceanic Scene

ripples of  blue ebb

               as ocean pebbles crumble--

                                   washing summer out





Tania Kitchin's Ocean Waves Haiku Contest
1/27/2019

oceansummerhaiku

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Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 3/27/2019 6:43:00 PM

Beautiful imagery.

Susan Ashley

Date: 2/12/2019 11:48:00 AM

The softly shining beauty and artistry of your poetry never fails to to leave me in awe, Nette. Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTD honors. Warmest wishes always, dear poetess. ~Susan

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/3/2019 5:44:00 PM

I love the subtle beauty in this lovely haiku Nette. Congratulations on having it honored for POTD! : ) xxoo

Valerie Staton

Date: 2/3/2019 4:40:00 PM

Nicely written. Thoroughly enjoyed reading.

Silent One

Date: 2/2/2019 7:16:00 AM

Great imagery Nette.. Congrats on POTD..

Duke Beaufort

Date: 2/1/2019 4:17:00 AM

Yes, it's cold now, and I am hopeful spring will come. Climate change is causing the polar vortex to lose containment, and we are suffering a bit. Ugh!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/31/2019 4:39:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work. Very creative indeed. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Robert Lindley

Date: 1/31/2019 8:19:00 AM

Congratulations my great friend on this superbly crafted haiku being honored with POTD honors here at the Soup....

Don Standeford

Date: 1/30/2019 8:15:00 PM

Nice, especially for such a compact form.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/30/2019 6:40:00 PM

I love this, Nette!! Congrats for your win.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/30/2019 1:31:00 PM

Your thoughts touch the page with such elegance and grace. This is beautiful. Congratulations nette, on Poem of the Day. On this win as well. :) Brandy

Arthur Vaso

Date: 1/30/2019 12:54:00 PM

I missed this, beautiful and congrats on POTD!!!

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 1/30/2019 12:42:00 PM

Congrats, for the win, but also for this honor. A beautiful POTD

P.S. Awtry

Date: 1/30/2019 12:06:00 PM

What a lovely POTD! Congratulations Nette :)

Constance La France

Date: 1/30/2019 12:00:00 PM

Nette, congratulations on having your beautiful poem selected as POTD, enjoy the honor~

Joseph May

Date: 1/30/2019 10:06:00 AM

Wonderful write Nette..Congrats on POTD..

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 1/30/2019 9:49:00 AM

Congratulations! Lovely image.

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/30/2019 9:31:00 AM

Hi Nette, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on getting the poem of day. It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Winged Warrior

Date: 1/30/2019 8:55:00 AM

Congrats!!! nette on your POTD!!...lovely surfing my friend...love & light...^WW^

Vladislav Raven

Date: 1/30/2019 8:48:00 AM

Hi Nette, a wonderful Haiku painting a wonderful image. Congratulations on your well-deserved Poem Of The Day honour with this wonderful write. Goes into my Haiku faves. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Hugs....Mike. XX