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Oceanic Peace

before sleep embraces me I look into my love's eyes soul-swept by azure waves of oceanic peace for Line Gauthier's the 'Bitesize Poem no52' Poetry Contest
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Daniel Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 6:45 AM
Congrats on a well deserved win, Andrea:)
Onclaud Avatar
June 26, 2016 at 10:01 AM
ohh, you soothe, you make my lungs collapse.. a beauty, andie.. big congrats for your high slot in my contest.. huggs
Warrior Avatar
June 26, 2016 at 9:57 AM
Congrats congrats congrats Andrea!!!!!!!!...god bless...^WW^
Cheema Avatar
June 26, 2016 at 8:20 AM
Congrats on this romantic win, Andrea!
Misra Avatar
June 25, 2016 at 8:50 PM
Beautiful, Andrea. Congrats on your win in the contest. ~karam~
Canerdy Avatar
June 25, 2016 at 3:59 PM
A 7 for this lovely winning poem! Janice
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 25, 2016 at 3:41 PM
This poem is so beautifully romantic Andrea. Congratulations on your top placement. I love this impressive piece and am faving it! 7 ; )
Devnath  Avatar
June 25, 2016 at 2:31 PM
Excellently done my lovely smiling friend. Congrats on your great win. A 7. Loved always, bl
Warrior Avatar
June 25, 2016 at 10:38 AM
A lovely dodoitsu Andrea..."oceanic peace"...beautiful words...hard to believe its 5 syllables lol...great work...^WW^
Babcock Avatar
June 24, 2016 at 8:40 PM
Beautiful stunning. love phyl
Walker Avatar
June 24, 2016 at 6:35 AM
Your imagery so vividly at work.
Anish Avatar
June 23, 2016 at 9:25 PM
Fine romantic work here! Nice imagery! Peace & Love Matthew Ansih
Lawless Avatar
June 23, 2016 at 8:59 PM
this would appear to be the final booking. Really nice one, Andrea. Should do well
A  Avatar
June 23, 2016 at 7:54 PM
It's called... Secret of the Mortician.... Don't forget to read Lindas...old poem... like a girl... Lol I added audio for my sister. She said she's removing tomorrow
Kendrick Avatar
June 23, 2016 at 6:58 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for stopping by.Sara
Parker Avatar
June 23, 2016 at 6:19 PM
very nice ..I notice no sunglasses..good luck
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