Oceananigans I and Ii

I.

Ode the thrill of a tango
curled in clutches sleek

Elegance, a prerequisite
Add on a spun euphoria

Nimble is a turgid swoon!

Arms conduct to the aria
New skin, feels no tocsin
It's deeply in a you and i
Glazed, to the tightening
and a strangling organza
Necked into a suffocation

So go the tunnel deaths…

(1/27/2021: '02 Silverton MY; Alameda ...contest theme was murder in the tunnel)

II.

Ornately, I gild over my days a’ la fresco
Carefully, I wield molten gold, enigmatic
Elaborate must these life undulations be
as metallic sheen screens all insipid aura
New cantankerous crack? Just weld upon
and smooth the jagged with flowing flora
Now the feckless plaster sparkles golden
I spurn mawkish, like the silvered literati
glossing my craven, to caverns gleaming
Aurum weaves, in its narcissistic miasma 
Nothing malodorous in self-love / loathin’
So imperious my bombastic art, it glazes!

(8.17.21 Redone at Willow Berm and DBW; theme was Craig’s Broken contest relating to Kintsugi)
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Fowler Avatar
February 11, 2021 at 9:56 AM
Unique and oh so intriguing! Linda
Woodrow Avatar
February 11, 2021 at 6:48 PM
thanks Linda :)
Downing  Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 8:39 PM
WOW! This is some imagery right here, Susan. You’re one crazy awesome artist :)
Woodrow Avatar
February 3, 2021 at 1:41 PM
thank you Akkina...you got the crazy right! lol :)
Dietrich Avatar
January 30, 2021 at 10:15 AM
oh my, such vivid unique description in this. Well done!
Woodrow Avatar
January 30, 2021 at 10:40 AM
Thanks, Andrea :)
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