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Ocean Waves Haiku

moonlight draws her back erases her scent, her touch morning seagulls cry ©1/27/2019 Ocean Waves Haiku Poetry Contest Tania Kitchin - sponsor

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Date: 1/30/2019 6:50:00 PM

Yours is fantastic, for me one of the best.

Date: 1/29/2019 8:18:00 AM

- I'm back with congratulations, John :)

Date: 1/28/2019 7:52:00 PM

Lovely imagery, congratulations on your winning placement!

Date: 1/28/2019 7:35:00 PM

Very touching. So very lovely, John.

Date: 1/28/2019 5:32:00 PM

Sweet Haiku, my friend, with wonderful imagery and metaphor ... another ray of sun in my dreary day. Blessings!

Date: 1/28/2019 4:08:00 AM

- Can both see and hear this haiku, John :) - Beautiful - Luck in the contest - // Anne-Lise :)

Date: 1/27/2019 10:53:00 AM

Terrific John, best wishes in the contest...

John Lawless
Date: 1/27/2019 10:53:00 PM

Thanks Charlie, had to toss a little metaphor in there