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Ocean Waves At Sunrise

Light in her angel eyes, shines innocence, sweet and pure Glistening ocean waves at sunrise not subtle but audacious Pools of light reflect the truth when her words do not assure Irises full of gold flecks and green, the sun and sea engage us Eyes of wonder enlightened more by her precocious smile Secrets concealed beneath their splendor, sensitive and vivacious Compassionate heart, a smile given to comfort those with trials Questioning mind, mature and wise trying to right all wrongs A friendly girl, her gracious eyes invite others to stay a while Beautiful girl of nine years, do not relinquish youth for fear Your ocean soul flows through your eyes, infinite and free The light of the Lord will shine on you and dry every flowing tear Ocean waves at sunrise, your soul will always be a beacon of light ~ Shining through your eyes for all to see By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders For my niece, Lili Second Place in Your Own Favorite Contest February 2012 Sponsor: Debbie Guzzi

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Date: 3/9/2012 6:08:00 PM
A lovely descriptive write, Rhonda. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/8/2012 2:20:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this lovely work..Congrats on your win..It shows your true love of your niece..Sara
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Date: 3/7/2012 10:21:00 AM
RHONDA,,... A VERY LATE .Congratulations ON MY 2ND PLACE CONTEST.. THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest...much enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD
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Date: 3/7/2012 7:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "2nd Place Poems Only" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/6/2012 7:41:00 PM
Congrats on your 2nd and 11th place win- JH
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Date: 3/6/2012 7:33:00 PM
congrats Rhonda on an awesome write and win.. a dreamy delight of imagery luv..
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Date: 3/6/2012 5:42:00 PM
A beautiful uplifting write and well deserved placement. I loved it. Hugs Michael
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Date: 2/7/2012 5:49:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this lovely poem, Rhonda! Love, Kim
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/7/2012 7:12:00 PM
Thank you, Kim! Blessings, Rhonda
Date: 2/7/2012 5:03:00 PM
congrats on your win in the contest with this sweetly written dedication to your niece, some lovely images :-)
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/7/2012 7:12:00 PM
Thanks, Charlotte for you comments! I am appreciative. Blessings, Rhonda
Date: 2/7/2012 4:57:00 PM
Beautiful write Rhonda! Enjoyed it very much. Congratulations :) Jon
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/7/2012 7:11:00 PM
Thank you, Jon! So glad you liked it. Blessings, Rhonda
Date: 2/7/2012 1:16:00 PM
Congrats Rhonda on a stupendous second place success for this dynamic delight poetry luv..
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/7/2012 7:10:00 PM
Thank you, Linda- Marie! You are always so kind. Blessings, Rhonda
Date: 2/7/2012 11:53:00 AM
Congratulations to you on your placement in Debbie Guzzi's "Your Own Favorite Poem" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/7/2012 7:11:00 PM
Thank you, Carol for all of your comments tonight!
Date: 2/7/2012 10:48:00 AM
Congratulations Rhonda . lovely x
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/7/2012 7:08:00 PM
Thank you, Mandy!! Blessings, Rhonda
Date: 2/7/2012 10:12:00 AM
I am so glad I got a chance to read this. A beautiful write Rhonda. Congratulations
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/7/2012 7:08:00 PM
Thank you, Bob! I'm so glad you read and liked it. Blessings, Rhonda
Date: 2/7/2012 9:38:00 AM
Congrats, Rhonda. Awesome write. Well deserved win. Kudos. Nice going. Best to you and yours. luv Ralph
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/7/2012 7:07:00 PM
Thanks, Ralph! I appreciate your kind comments. Blessings, Rhonda
Date: 2/7/2012 8:55:00 AM
So wonderful to see you using such an exquiste form for such an equisite topic! This is when having a big tool box comes in handy and you chose well! Congrad's on your big win. Light & Love
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/7/2012 7:06:00 PM
Thank you, Debbie! Means a lot coming from you. I know you are honest in your feedback, and I am grateful for the placement. Blessings, Rhonda
Date: 1/29/2012 11:55:00 PM
This one reminds me of my trip to New Smyrna Beach last weekend. "Gold flecks and green" Cool imagery. I can DiGG it!~JSL
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 1/30/2012 12:06:00 AM
Glad you liked it!! Are you a Floridian, too? I love New Smyrna Beach. I took a weekend trip to Sanibel two weeks ago. We have so many great beaches. I take it for granted at times. Thanks for the comments! Blessings, Rhonda
Date: 1/29/2012 10:03:00 PM
A very lovely expressed story poem Rhonda.I enjoyed reading it.God bless you. Hugs!Erich
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 1/29/2012 11:02:00 PM
Thank you, Erich! I'm glad you liked it. Blessings and hugs returned! Rhonda
Date: 1/29/2012 9:12:00 PM
I agree with everything Mia has stated below. This is very descriptive.
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 1/29/2012 9:14:00 PM
Robert, did you just get my reply to Mia? So Sorry. For some reason, this keeps happening to me. Thank you for reading and commenting. My niece is very special.
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 1/29/2012 9:12:00 PM
My niece, Lili, is a beautiful girl inside and out. Thanks to you, too!! Blessings, Rhonda
Date: 1/29/2012 8:54:00 PM
beautiful! simply beautiful, she must be sooo lovely. thank you for stopping by and your kind comments Rhonda
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/7/2012 7:04:00 PM
Thanks for reading and commenting, Mia! You are very kind. Yes, Lili is a beautiful girl. Blessings, Rhonda

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