Susan Szoke Poet Free verse

Ocean Walk

under a delightful moon
      air silvermist due to drizzling rain
  a pale patina rode wavetops
              of the mystic sea

creamy waters washed across my feet
depositing opaline conchs, whelk egg cases
    and bits of purple fan coral
  oceanic generosity
          fueled my thankfulness
      as the horizon's apricot blush
                  announced sunrise

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John Gondolf January 11, 2022 at 2:02 AM Sunrise is a beautiful time to take a stroll on the beach. I love the imagery in this piece, Susan, welcome to Poetry Soup. John Susan Szoke January 11, 2022 at 10:11 AM Thank you so much, John. You and others have made me feel welcome. I appreciate that.

Darlene De Beaulieu January 10, 2022 at 3:55 PM Hello Sysan Szoke, so nice to meet you. This poem is beautifully done. Enjoy yur evening my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu January 11, 2022 at 10:24 AM Hello Susan, it is nice to meet you. You ar4e welcome. Enjoy your day my friend.Hugs. Susan Szoke January 11, 2022 at 1:08 AM Thank you so very much! Nice to meet you, also!

Deb M January 10, 2022 at 3:10 PM That’s beautiful Susan. Debx Susan Szoke January 11, 2022 at 1:12 AM Thanks so much, Deb! You are a faithful reader and I thank you!

Susan Woodrow January 10, 2022 at 12:50 PM beautiful! :) Susan Szoke January 11, 2022 at 1:14 AM I thank you much!

Jo Chamberlain January 10, 2022 at 12:28 PM Great imagery. Nicely penned. Susan Szoke January 11, 2022 at 1:16 AM I thank you kindly!