Ocean Walk

under a delightful moon
      air silvermist due to drizzling rain
  a pale patina rode wavetops
              of the mystic sea

creamy waters washed across my feet
depositing opaline conchs, whelk egg cases
    and bits of purple fan coral
  oceanic generosity
          fueled my thankfulness
      as the horizon's apricot blush
                  announced sunrise

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Date: 1/11/2022 2:02:00 AM
Sunrise is a beautiful time to take a stroll on the beach. I love the imagery in this piece, Susan, welcome to Poetry Soup. John
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Susan Szoke
Date: 1/11/2022 10:11:00 AM
Thank you so much, John. You and others have made me feel welcome. I appreciate that.
Date: 1/10/2022 3:55:00 PM
Hello Sysan Szoke, so nice to meet you. This poem is beautifully done. Enjoy yur evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/11/2022 10:24:00 AM
Hello Susan, it is nice to meet you. You ar4e welcome. Enjoy your day my friend.Hugs.
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Susan Szoke
Date: 1/11/2022 1:08:00 AM
Thank you so very much! Nice to meet you, also!
Date: 1/10/2022 3:10:00 PM
That’s beautiful Susan. Debx
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Susan Szoke
Date: 1/11/2022 1:12:00 AM
Thanks so much, Deb! You are a faithful reader and I thank you!
Date: 1/10/2022 12:50:00 PM
beautiful! :)
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Susan Szoke
Date: 1/11/2022 1:14:00 AM
I thank you much!
Date: 1/10/2022 12:28:00 PM
Great imagery. Nicely penned.
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Susan Szoke
Date: 1/11/2022 1:16:00 AM
I thank you kindly!
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