Ocean View

It was not a night for work
the moon was at the full
high over the sea
erotic and disturbing
l could hear the gypsy singer in the tavern below
self assured as usual she had a slightly distant air about her !
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Pettit Avatar
June 20, 2012 at 3:08 PM
There's a town along Route 9 in Cape May County in southern New Jersey known as "Ocean View". The trouble is, you can't see the ocean when you're there. Good writing.
Andresen Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 2:00 PM
Nigel, well written....like it. - oxox Anne-Lise
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June 16, 2012 at 6:15 PM
Nigel, seeing and feeling at the same time is amazing,, enjoyed..xox~pd
Henderson Avatar
June 16, 2012 at 3:27 PM
This be true for us all. Does it not? Peace and many blessing Nigel.
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