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Ocean So Blue

Waves break a distance away. Then break again close to shore Appearing in rows, an orderly display, With perfect timing not seen before. Ocean so blue in the afternoon light, water gently flows over the sand. Waves wear a crest of frothy white. A vision of cotton candy on land. As daylight fades, the darker the sea. Golden streaks of sunlight almost gone. Lacey white curls, rise elegantly, one final glimmer, the sun moves on.

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Date: 2/21/2022 10:14:00 AM
This is beautiful Sandy. I love the ending too :)
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 2/25/2022 7:23:00 AM
Thank you Heidi. Glad that you like the ending.
Date: 2/19/2022 12:23:00 PM
I was going to take a 2 mile walk to the ocean but your poem has already taken me there
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 2/20/2022 8:30:00 AM
What a lovely thing to say! Thank you so much, Frederic.
Date: 2/18/2022 4:38:00 PM
Quite true! Enjoyed! Aloha!
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 2/18/2022 5:43:00 PM
Thank you, Rico. Love the Aloha!

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