Ocean Sands

The wet smooth sands shift, as we stroll along
While hands clasp by evening's riding tide
The long red sky hears each gliding bird's song
As your soft silhouette n' sky doth clash collide

In quiet motion, love loses all space and time
As our lips warmly join together a silent spell
To bright for sun's array, she fades to sleep
As moon awakes the rays, of tender keep

And both remain abandoned to the shore
To find the realm that lover's shall confess
With hands still clasped eyes they now explore
As hungry kisses gentle still caress

Grains feel wet yet cool, between our hands
And the elixir of love is light, like ocean sands



Written by Mystic Rose and Frederic Parker
April 29, 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Kendrick Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 4:29 PM
Passionate winning work..Way to go..Congrats..Sara
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May 3, 2014 at 12:37 AM
wonderful win.... good night Frederic... Linda
Parker Avatar
May 4, 2014 at 9:05 PM
thank you Linda
Johnson Avatar
May 2, 2014 at 7:12 PM
Lovely collaboration. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Parker Avatar
May 2, 2014 at 7:37 PM
thank you Joyce
Guzzi Avatar
May 2, 2014 at 7:09 PM
Nice duet! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Parker Avatar
May 2, 2014 at 7:37 PM
thank you Debbie for your kindness
Gibson Avatar
May 2, 2014 at 5:40 PM
Beautiful, beautiful. . . Congratulations!
Parker Avatar
May 2, 2014 at 7:36 PM
thank you for reading and for your kind response
Devonshire Avatar
April 29, 2014 at 4:21 PM
Dear Frederic and Vie, Wow! You did a wonderful job on this collaboration. I live near the beach and see the happy couples strolling along all hours of the day and night. For some, the ocean and it's sands ARE an elixir of love. Beautiful work! (Frederic, Vie's a great lady with a big heart. Hope you write together again.) Love, Carolyn
Parker Avatar
April 29, 2014 at 4:28 PM
thank you,Mystic and I have written together before, and I also live close to the ocean..3 miles
Smith Avatar
April 28, 2014 at 6:56 PM
This is magnificent. I love the line "With hands still clasped eyes they now explore As hungry kisses gentle still caress"
Parker Avatar
April 29, 2014 at 4:29 PM
thanks Tim Mystic is easy to write with
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