Michael J. Falotico Poet Free verse

Ocean Dreams

When the walls seem tall
                                                      and the road your on
                                                              feels like an
                                                                  endless
                                                                     hall.
 
                                                           Your place is here
                                                             where the vision
                                                                 of tranquility
                                                                     is your 
                                                                      home.

                                                           No other place can
                                                             hold your peace
                                                               where dreams
                                                                 trickle slowly
                                                               with cascading
                                                                      ease.

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Kabuteng P.Ink K. July 28, 2012 at 12:54 PM What a very comforting read this is Michael...that last stanza really brought it home I think... thank you for dropping by my page with your inspiring words and hugs to you as well! You sure seem to have enjoyed your holiday, yay for that!

Andrea Dietrich July 16, 2012 at 9:00 PM a wall of ocean to be my home. I think it would be divine. To be a mermaid, or I'd even settle for a dolphin!! This is great stuff as usual. I especially enjoyed the last stanza. NICE seeing you back.

Poet Destroyer A July 10, 2012 at 4:26 PM Michael, nice to see you here today.... awee... tickle tickle tickle... Very soothing wonderful captivating from the start thank you ..luv pd

Wilma Neels July 10, 2012 at 11:41 AM This has such a peaceful feeling to it MJF, absolutely enjoyed reading tonight.. Enjoy the week ahead.. Love Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 10, 2012 at 10:47 AM intense and intricate lines flowing as ocean waves luv .. lovely thoughts and form is wonderful.. u composed so well.. JG is so happy to read her W.K. once more .. xoxo..

David Williams July 10, 2012 at 4:35 AM Michael I like this, it is different from your style...David

Russell Sivey July 9, 2012 at 3:46 PM What a beautifully positive piece my friend! Sometimes the ocean seems to be the only place to find solace! And it's certainly welcomed! Wonderful write! Great Work!!