Ocean Dance

I watched a group of twelve-year-olds
digging in the sand
No older though, for they squealed in laughter
Heads thrown back in the wind
Something in the sand and water excited them
And I swear they did a circular dance around the liquid hole

I drank in the freedom
of those prepubescent boys
So thrilled and free they were that day
that I became invisible as I passed.
I wondered to myself
Had I ever laughed so fully
in the whole of my existence?
I hope to do so someday
now that I see it can be done.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Beaufort Avatar
June 23, 2024 at 5:50 PM
Fran....yes see and experience the joy of life by all means. I also try to do it!
Nicholsen Avatar
March 5, 2024 at 3:07 PM
Awesome write
Brown Avatar
April 28, 2023 at 8:39 AM
Wonderful!
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