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Ocean Calling

*Writing helps us through anything. Oh, the ocean is calling me Collecting the shells at the sea Watching the curling, rolling waves, wash away pain that enslaves My dreams are on horizon there I will make them come true with care This is my chance, footprints behind Left just like the shells I find I am as simple as the sea shell I can be fragile, just as well But, strong enough, not left broken From the ocean that has spoken Heidi Sands 6/26/24 8 syllables (C)opyright

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Date: 6/27/2024 8:27:00 PM
Love it. Shells intact. Ocean in motion! :) gw
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/27/2024 9:33:00 PM
I am happy you love it. Thanks Gershon :)
Date: 6/27/2024 3:21:00 AM
An anticipation of footprints in the sand, Lovely verse Heidi
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/27/2024 5:23:00 AM
Thank you so much Joseph :)
Date: 6/27/2024 3:09:00 AM
Heidi, how beautiful is your poem. I felt I was there gathering sea shells. Full of emotion, courage and strength and so true writing helps us through anything ! A FAV, Constance
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/27/2024 5:23:00 AM
Thank you so much Constance ! I appreciate your kind comment and the Fave :)
Date: 6/27/2024 1:53:00 AM
A fav for me. Beautiful poem! Well written.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/27/2024 5:22:00 AM
Thank you very much Daisy I appreciate the Fave :)
Date: 6/27/2024 1:19:00 AM
Lovely poem Heidi!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/27/2024 5:21:00 AM
Thank you Karen :)
Date: 6/26/2024 11:16:00 PM
nice to be at the beach right now, just to feel and smell the cool breeze since it is warm here. Good one Heidi
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/26/2024 11:47:00 PM
Yes, true. Thank you Eve :)

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