Ocean

deep blue mysteries
swell in waves of harmony
a whirlwind romance

12/4/13

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/28/2013 5:41:00 PM

Tahera, a very nice and awesome poem. Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) Take care, and enjoy the new coming week. Always & Forever! HUGS **LINDA**

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 4/28/2013 9:57:00 AM

A beautiful write. Congrats on your win. love phyl

Christine Phillips

Date: 4/26/2013 9:47:00 PM

Very strong powerful piece. Its very beautiful.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/24/2013 8:03:00 PM

Tahera, a nice winning Ku' poem... Congratulations in Heather's lovely haiku contest. xox~ Linda

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 4/24/2013 9:03:00 AM

Lovely piece,Tahera...Great write..Congrats on your superb win...

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 4/24/2013 6:38:00 AM

many congratulations Tahera love xx

Afroze Ali

Date: 4/24/2013 4:12:00 AM

Tahera this is really lovely. Congratulations. Mystery, harmony and romance. Beautiful.

Donna Jones

Date: 4/23/2013 1:12:00 PM

Beautiful congratulations

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/23/2013 8:41:00 AM

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S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 4/22/2013 11:43:00 PM

Your take on it is quite creative and lovely, dear:) Jag

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/17/2013 2:27:00 PM

Great work for the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading it..It is so very creative..Thanks for stopping by to let me know that I placed in a contest..Sara

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 4/17/2013 11:33:00 AM

Love your weaving of nature and emotion.

Len Gasun

Date: 4/17/2013 3:25:00 AM

A great ocean haiku showing a very lovely image! So much love it! Thank you so much for sharing my dear friend Tahera. Thank you so much also for your congratulatory comments! Good luck and wish you all the best! love and hugs, Leonora