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July- 24- 2026

Nature Haiku on Lake, Ocean or River Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Tania Kitchin

~ Placed Second~

ocean

vast teal blue ocean
      ever wobbling briny mass~
           calm or wild in turn

Copyright © Valsa George | Year Posted 2026

moving onoceanhaiku

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August 30, 2026 at 5:04 AM

Congratulations on your winning work in the contest. Way to go. I like this one. I like to stand on the shore and look at the water but to be out in the middle not my greatest desire. Thank you for sharing this one with us. 👏✍️. Sara K.

Krishnanand Guptar

August 4, 2026 at 11:47 AM

Congratulations Valsa on your high win in this contest with a beautiful hIKu on the ocean with lovely imagery .

August 3, 2026 at 12:04 PM

Back to say congratulations on your win!

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 3, 2026 at 11:11 AM

- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Valsa :) - hugs

August 3, 2026 at 2:08 AM

Back with warm congratulations on your podium win, Valsa.

Andrea Dietrich

August 2, 2026 at 6:56 PM

Verrry nice. How did I not see this before? 👍 Big congrats

August 2, 2026 at 2:33 PM

Valsa, congratulations on your winning placement with your beautiful ocean haiku. Like the imagery of the calm or wild seas.

August 3, 2026 at 2:18 AM

Thanks a lot Tania for the placement given and your appreciative comment.

July 26, 2026 at 4:44 PM

Always exciting, whether calm or wild!

July 25, 2026 at 10:14 PM

beautiful

July 24, 2026 at 11:20 AM

Valsa, you have used the ideal words to describe the ocean, and your writing is superb. Great job! Best of luck to you in the contest.

July 24, 2026 at 6:50 AM

You’ve captured both moods of the ocean. Nice haiku! Good luck in the contest!

July 24, 2026 at 5:52 AM

Love the scene Valsa, the oceans can be do unpredictable, always prepare for the worst. Have a lovely weekend. Tom

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