Ocean

Oceans' august waves, born when time began,
peaceful, serene as they whisper to land.
Caressing sand, a gift of starfish shells,
their music heard, a concerto of swells.

Stormy, jet black seascapes, blustery nights;
Ships and storms eclipsing in epic fights.
Neptune roused to lead his bold, thrashing tide,
lives on the line, nightmares riding astride.

Oceans' ebb and flow present in our lives.
Emotions spill like angry, disturbed hives.
When skies meditate with warm, gentled sun,
passions are softened, Ocean's songs are sung.

September 23, 2021
Constance La France
"O" CONTEST, NEW POEMS 
FIRST PLACE, September 24, 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Sangster - K Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 8:03 PM
I not surprised you won Ann. Your Ocean poem is simply beautiful. Congratulations on your well deserved win! I absolutely love the ocean and as I read each line it took me away in sounds and visions. Cheers my friend :-)
Peck Avatar
March 12, 2022 at 8:05 PM
Dear Anne, I just found your comments. Like a dummy, I had forgotten the name of this poem that I wanted to send to an artist friend. Thank you so much for liking it. I wish I could visit the ocean more often. :)
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October 5, 2021 at 7:27 AM
Ann, congratulations on your win in my "O" contest with this splendid poem, I find it quite beautiful, well done ~ love and serenity _Constance
Peck Avatar
October 5, 2021 at 8:18 AM
Thank you so much, Constance. I can't tell you how much this win thrilled me!
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September 26, 2021 at 6:14 PM
Really lovely Ann, love the last two lines “When skies meditate with warm, gentled sun, passions are softened, Ocean's songs are sung.” Congratulations on your top spot win in Constance’s contest… Belle
Peck Avatar
September 30, 2021 at 7:39 AM
Thank you, Belle. It's ironic: I live in the southwest desert and win with a poem about the ocean! I'm honored.
Goldsmith Avatar
September 26, 2021 at 11:50 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful "Ocean" story/write. I love the ocean and this write. Have a blessed day with your win...............
Peck Avatar
September 26, 2021 at 3:51 PM
Paula, thank you so much for your comments. I'm still in shock :)
Clear Avatar
September 26, 2021 at 9:44 AM
Anne, Congratulations for WINNING! You are always and have been a winner to me. i look forward to your interesting thoughts and words. You are such a natural..........so creative..just like your beautiful paintings! Wish all could see you in all your glory! It has been my pleasure to have known you ......you enriched my life and others who have known you!!! yippee for your WIN!!!! Your sons will be so proud too!!! suzanne
Peck Avatar
September 26, 2021 at 3:50 PM
Oh Suzanne, thank you so much. You're such a dear friend, like a sister, really :)
Mcgee Avatar
September 26, 2021 at 5:10 AM
the ocean in all it's beauty reflected here in your poem. Congrats on your top win Ann.
Peck Avatar
September 26, 2021 at 9:18 AM
Thank you, Jeanne, for taking time to comment. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
September 25, 2021 at 6:09 AM
Love the second verse - clashes of ships, storms, epic flights. Congratulations!
Peck Avatar
September 26, 2021 at 9:16 AM
Thank you, Kim. I'm in shock!
Alex Avatar
September 24, 2021 at 10:37 PM
Beautiful scenes and imagery. Great work. Congratulations!
Peck Avatar
September 26, 2021 at 9:15 AM
Thank you so much for your comments!
Jayasankar Avatar
September 24, 2021 at 11:24 AM
So well penned Ann... specially the first stanza... Hugs... ~ Ani
Peck Avatar
September 24, 2021 at 3:03 PM
Thank you, Ani! I appreciate your comments so much!
Peck Avatar
September 24, 2021 at 7:15 AM
Thank you so much for your comments, Tom. I'm delighted it made you feel tranquil!
Cunningham Avatar
September 24, 2021 at 5:21 AM
Such a tranquil place to be Ann. You captured it well, good luck in the contest. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
September 23, 2021 at 5:59 PM
Beautiful!
Peck Avatar
September 23, 2021 at 9:08 PM
Thank you so much, Kim. It was enjoyable to write.
Dietrich Avatar
September 23, 2021 at 4:34 PM
This is a lovely tribute to the ocean. I can't wait to see it on the winners' list.
Peck Avatar
September 23, 2021 at 9:12 PM
Oh, how kind of you to write that, Andrea. I'm just chalking it up to good experience :)
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