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Ocean

Liquid graces of nature so splendidly pooled, Like the poles, few facets hot few chilly ice-cooled; Countless marvels, like mountains of pearls, heaped within, Fullness, like streams, falling from underworld-god Gwyn; Vast, wide, wild, Kaleidoscope of colors glowing, Deep down, like Amazon, curly rivers flowing... Fish, frogs, snakes, whales, like unique stars swimming wondrous, Corals, Kelps, whips, like sun-rays shining splendorous; Gold, silver, diamonds... like rocks, lying lifeless, Fleet-wrecked; quakes-hit; hidden lost treasures so countless; Enriching each little water drop, top to down, Urging to dive, search, find as much as one could crown... Waters from mountains and hills flawlessly flowing, Filling deepest of the depths, like whirlpool-blowing; What hidden dams within, that reserve them safe! What monstrous sponges that absorb each water waif! Ocean cares all as a mother her babe caring, Midst each one within spiritual care sharing... Beauty, marvelous, like heaven, ever booming, Vastness, like the crust of the universe, zooming; Waves, like hearts restless, severe, ceaselessly breaking, Caves within, by haunting quakes, stringently shaking; Sweat, tears, rolls, ripples … all as though divinity, Isn't each ocean a sign of eternity? 23 September 2021 ''O'' Contest, NEW POEMS Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 10/5/2021 8:04:00 AM
Christuraj, congratulations on your win in my "O" contest with this wonderful poem, well done ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Date: 9/28/2021 10:41:00 AM
Chris! Congratulations for your win. Your imagery is wonderfully unique and fresh. Your lines flow like the tides. Blessings.
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Date: 9/26/2021 6:09:00 PM
Now beautifully and poetically well you describe the ocean Christuraj, congratulations on a well deserved win in Constance’s contest… Belle
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Date: 9/26/2021 11:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Ocean" is a beautiful story/write. I Love It. Have a blessed day with your win...............
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Date: 9/26/2021 9:40:00 AM
Beautifully penned poem. I love your last line especially. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/25/2021 6:08:00 AM
Beautiful imagery! You’ve covered caves and treasures. I am faving this because your ocean is packed with eternity! Love it!
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Date: 9/25/2021 5:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win Alex, you deserve it with this wonderfully penned poem.
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Date: 9/25/2021 2:36:00 AM
A great journey with wonderful imagery. Congratulations on your win Christuraj. Emilia : )
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 9/25/2021 5:04:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 9/24/2021 11:23:00 PM
WoW! What a imagery of ocean. Well penned friend. Congratulations
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 9/25/2021 5:04:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 9/24/2021 11:09:00 PM
WOW! What an exploration of the ocean. So vividly penned. Congratulations.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 9/25/2021 5:04:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 9/24/2021 10:49:00 AM
Good exploration of Ocean. All the best. I have also chosen Ocean for the same contest.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 9/24/2021 10:58:00 PM
Thank you very much.

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