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Ocean

I sit on a rock
Looking faraway
Where the ocean meets the sky
Forming a huge circle

I hear 
The sand gently
Lapped by waves

A gull flies by
Glancing at me with a smile
Seeming to say
Isn’t ocean vast and beautiful?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 9/30/2019 10:34:00 AM
Where the ocean meets the sky.. that's where I want to be. Beautiful, and peaceful. The ocean and your lovely verse.
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Hi-Dong Chai
Date: 10/1/2019 11:24:00 AM
I find peace when I sit and watch the ocean. Thank you.
Date: 9/1/2019 10:05:00 PM
And it is "vast and beautiful" as is your poem, my friend.
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Hi-Dong Chai
Date: 9/2/2019 9:34:00 AM
I don't know why. But I feel at peace when I look far away over the ocean.

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