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Ocean


Ocean

waves loudly

crashing on shore

mercifully drown cares~

bring peace



5/5/2019
Writing Challenge 1, May 2019 - Cinqku - Poetry Contest
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Alkas Poetry

May 19, 2019 at 5:26 AM

The ocean is a great expression of divine power ... it teaches us lessons of humility and love! Beautiful poetry to your dear Awtry salute alkas

P.S. Awtry

May 19, 2019 at 9:00 AM

Thank you so much dear Alkas. -ps

Constance La France

May 14, 2019 at 10:17 AM

PS congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful poem and I love the image too!

P.S. Awtry

May 14, 2019 at 10:30 AM

thank you for your kind words. glad you liked it. :)

Ann Gilmour

May 14, 2019 at 9:46 AM

Many congrats PS on your win. I love the sounds of the sea, so calming and restorative when my soul feels troubled and I am so lucky to live beside it, walking there each day. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

P.S. Awtry

May 14, 2019 at 10:32 AM

Living by the sea! what a blessing! Thank you for reading and commenting :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 14, 2019 at 3:17 AM

- Congratulations on your win in the contest :)

P.S. Awtry

May 14, 2019 at 9:23 AM

it was a skin of the teeth finish! Thank you Sunshine! :) ~ps

Andrea Dietrich

May 13, 2019 at 6:39 PM

very nice one. Congrats in the contest.

P.S. Awtry

May 13, 2019 at 6:56 PM

I am glad you liked it. -ps

Wren Rushing

May 7, 2019 at 1:44 PM

P.S. Beautifully written. It reminds me of peaceful sunsets I've enjoyed on Dauphin Island Ala.

P.S. Awtry

May 7, 2019 at 2:25 PM

Nothing like some beach therapy :) Thank you so much! ~ps

M. L. Kiser

May 7, 2019 at 6:39 AM

A lovely word-painting with vibrant imagery; well done and good luck in the contest.

P.S. Awtry

May 7, 2019 at 7:12 AM

Thank you very much ML :) ~ps

Tania Kitchin

May 7, 2019 at 4:37 AM

Love this, good luck in the contest, well done!

P.S. Awtry

May 7, 2019 at 7:10 AM

Thank you Tania :) ~ps

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 7, 2019 at 4:14 AM

- Harmonic and beautiful, P.S. :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

P.S. Awtry

May 7, 2019 at 6:22 AM

O wow, thank you Anne-Lise -ps

Panagiota Romios

May 7, 2019 at 3:21 AM

Mind lblowing Panagiota

P.S. Awtry

May 7, 2019 at 6:21 AM

Thank you Panagiota -ps

Maurice Rigoler

May 6, 2019 at 6:49 PM

Thanks for reading my work, Best to you.

P.S. Awtry

May 7, 2019 at 7:10 AM

My pleasure. I always enjoy your writing! :) ~ps

Susan Ashley

May 6, 2019 at 6:44 PM

Simply stunning, P.S. I felt your poem to my core. Inspiring poetry. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan

P.S. Awtry

May 6, 2019 at 9:04 PM

Thank you, very much Susan.

Caren Krutsinger

May 6, 2019 at 4:39 PM

It is amazing how fast water changes from crashing to peaceful. Soup Mail my friend.

P.S. Awtry

May 6, 2019 at 7:29 PM

Kinda wondering if crashing is too strong a word..,

Timothy Mcguire

May 6, 2019 at 3:14 PM

I felt peace come over me as I was reading this great poem! Thanks

P.S. Awtry

May 6, 2019 at 3:46 PM

Oh, I am glad. Thank you so much for saying so :)

Gershon Wolf

May 6, 2019 at 2:21 PM

Peaceful waters, even when crashing. Love it. G.L. in the contest. ~ Gershon

P.S. Awtry

May 6, 2019 at 3:46 PM

It "drowns" out your thoughts. The sight, smell, feel, it "overwhelms" your senses. I highly recommend when faced with the inevitable punch-in-the-gut times of life, a trip to sit on a beach. Thank you :)