Ocd Ii

Most compulsives have never confessed
There are thoughts with which we're obsessed
Our inner vision
Views with great precision
The women our eyes have undressed

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Casarah Nance

Date: 7/15/2015 6:49:00 PM

Nice limerick, I enjoyed this, truth and all :)

Duke Beaufort
Date: 7/17/2015 7:13:00 AM

Casarah, thank-you. The truth is not a bad thing. I think about how we are wired. It's a strange result of millions of years of evolution. I am thinking that we need more psychiatrists on this planet of ours!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/12/2015 6:37:00 AM

- Truths submitted on the table :))) - Well done, Duke! - All the best! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Duke Beaufort
Date: 7/12/2015 6:45:00 AM

Thank-you ALA! The truth is said to set us free, but it is also embarrassing. However, for the sake of a smile, it's all in fun. I always love your work and your lovely embrace of life. Keep it coming!

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 7/8/2015 7:05:00 PM

Ha, ha....and most men don't need to have OCD to be guilty of this! ; )

Duke Beaufort
Date: 7/8/2015 8:24:00 PM

Cecilia, so...you have noticed this. It's hard to know exactly what is in another person's mind. But sometimes the look and staring just give it away! You are so right.

Duke Beaufort
Date: 7/8/2015 8:24:00 PM

That's why sunglasses are popular.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 7/6/2015 12:15:00 AM

I really like this one, Duke. It's got a personal wave of passion. OCD fascinates me... we're all human, we can get very obsessive at times - I know I can for a fact. Girls do it too no joke! Always, Laura

Duke Beaufort
Date: 7/7/2015 5:51:00 PM

It's all an intersection of truth and fun. I could be relaxed and normal until triggered. I hold you in awe and get a huge thrill to receive your comments. It means a lot. Thanks!