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Occurence In An Oculus

river is waist deep ambience of lily pads swings elephant trunks multitude of rubbernecks in dugout canoes; and me 1/31/2023

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/3/2023 11:09:00 AM

A fun trip/write. I really enjoyed this one. Have a great day writing away.............

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/3/2023 12:26:00 PM

So glad you enjoyed…may not be my reality but it virtually is ;) Thanks, Paula!

Mike Gentile

Date: 2/3/2023 6:06:00 AM

Kim, I love the visuals created for me by your Tanka! I feel like I'm in a Tarzan movie! Happy Friday xxoo

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/3/2023 12:25:00 PM

I love love love the Tarzan reference, Mike! My Dad used to put on a silent reel of Johnny Weissmuller as Tarzan. The cool thing is that my Uncle-in-law was taught to swim by the actor, as his mom was also an actress and his brother played in Black Beauty with Elizabeth Taylor…just a cool story to share! Thank you!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/2/2023 10:28:00 PM

This is virtually perfect, Kim! ... Now I have a question: If oculUS is singular, is oculI plural? ~ Just wondering, gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/3/2023 12:23:00 PM

I…I…or as you would have it aye aye ;) after all a pirates spyglass is limited to reality.

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/1/2023 5:50:00 PM

Oh, love this, Kim, and your reflection. Harry

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/2/2023 5:22:00 PM

Thank you, Harry! So glad to hear from you :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/1/2023 1:41:00 PM

Enjoyed your well-crafted Tanka, Kim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/2/2023 5:22:00 PM

Thank you, Lasaad!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/1/2023 1:20:00 PM

Cool one, kim!!I enjoyed your tanka

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/2/2023 5:22:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/1/2023 1:45:00 AM

Enjoyable poem, dear Kim. I can't recall if I have ever been on a canoe in my life. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/2/2023 5:26:00 PM

I was in one in Panama, down the Chagris River.

Michael Tor

Date: 1/31/2023 8:19:00 PM

Where did you go what jungle lol.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/2/2023 5:29:00 PM

Somewhere in Africa virtually

Joe Dimino

Date: 1/31/2023 3:01:00 PM

A delightful float. Thank you, Kim. Great mood work.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/2/2023 5:30:00 PM

Thank you, Joe!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/31/2023 2:44:00 PM

Very interesting and question raising. I am wondering where are there dugout canoes now? Your sharing this one is enlightening. I appreciate your visit to my page. Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/2/2023 5:30:00 PM

Thank you, Sara! :)