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Obstreperous Vocal Chords

I am lost, my eyes wide, and my heart quivering. My legs are paralyzed, and I have no memory. I stroll silently, my consciousness wandering. I am alone inside an unexplored territory. I would wish the room to be cold and inviting. I envy our heat vitality to come from within, trusting that it won't be an errorless meeting. I simply wish our spirits to embrace and grin. If anything, I crave to be on the last ship. It will set sail from the port this evening. I love to read and listen to the sea on a trip. For me, ocean melodies are alike love singing. I dream to be a bird that flies with the wind. Away from the realms of science and business. I hope that what I say will be defined. And, surely, my goal won over my madness. I starve to beat back that feeling of wholeness. I sense gravity and an utter void in the vicinity. Bringing me back to a firm base of neatness, since I'm heavy with knowledge and salinity. I desire to write for myself and believe again and will sing from the heart and avoid flattery. Apart from romance with myself after pain, I yearn to look weak, not prone to my mastery. Regardless of how narrow is my path. It obviously loaded the coil with censure. For punter or worse, my life is in my sheath. My soul's captain is myself, the sensor. If you can hold your cool under scrutiny, They'll gripe and hold you responsible. If you can trust yourself as others botching Charter their views, yet they look with mutiny.
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Goldsmith Avatar
December 28, 2022 at 9:17 AM
Congratulations on your win. A creative write. I enjoyed the picture. Wish I was there looking out your window. Have A Merry/Happy/Healthy/Blessed New Year 2023....................
George Avatar
December 27, 2022 at 9:53 PM
A poem of deep introspection, very contemplative and soul searching. Congratulations on your great win.
Alex Avatar
December 27, 2022 at 8:34 PM
Great work. Congratulations!
Buehler Avatar
December 19, 2022 at 12:05 PM
Lasaad, your contemplative and insightful poem was a pleasure to read today. Best wishes for the contest, Evelyn :)
Kendrick Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 2:07 PM
A very expressive and creative work. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. I can feel the emotion within the lines. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Pandit Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 6:06 AM
Contemplating, ruminating, exploring---voice of soul guides our journey--never a straight line, yet we make slow progress to destination. Best to you my friend.
Andresen Avatar
December 17, 2022 at 12:58 PM
- A deeply sensitive poem, Las - Beautifully written with obstreperous vocal chords - Luck in the contest :) - Wishing you and your family a Merry Christmas :) - hugs
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