Obsessive Hands

abreast of nightshade tipping the moon
hands of iron cupped my desire coaxing me,
into the shadow-lands of my obsession 


the shades moved
as your fingers found their mirror,
and iridescent trails of dark-light 
kaleidoscope across my skin 


I have visions of your hands
and their movements, 
I feel a rush of want
to pull in their need


obsessed 
I watch each wave
within every gesture 


I draw them closer
until your fingers,
cradle me
in shadows of night
within the palms 
of your hands


and all that remains 
is the jay feathers, 
and maple leaves
drifting onto my heart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Callus Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 9:53 AM
This is a great write Jayne! As Debbie said the ending does reach a climax! // paul
Eggins Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 10:05 AM
thanks Paul I am so happy you liked it :) big smile...love Jayne x
Guzzi Avatar
February 5, 2014 at 8:35 AM
whew! magic, magic! and a killer ending [free verse new poet friend blank verse has a set meter] a fav & a 7 Light & Love
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