Obsessed By Desire

She was so irresistible to him;
her untamed social expressions
were open for everyone to see.

She liked mostly sun-dresses
that created a silhouette of her naked
body in the sun; the summer breeze
occasionally blew against her dress and body,
making her breasts' perfect, round
shape to be visible.

Those are moments he liked walking
behind her and play with the edge
of her dress like a fiddle, slowly
opening up her dress like an umbrella.

Like a bird sucking nectar in a flower,
he went down on her,
making her to have different shades of red.

Her lips becoming redder, breasts rounder,
and pleasure gate wetter;
she hoped that the moment wouldn't end......
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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December 11, 2013 at 9:59 AM
Enjoyed Teddy.. Congratulations in "'Charlotte's Scorchers: Erotic/Sensual Poetry''...have a nice one... LUV LINDA
Kimathi Avatar
December 16, 2013 at 9:25 AM
Thanks again LINDA! Much love too! ;-)
Dietrich Avatar
December 8, 2013 at 4:19 PM
wowowow, HOT one. Congrats for the win. very lovely images of her walking in nature.
Kimathi Avatar
December 9, 2013 at 6:58 AM
Nature is innocent..... Thanks for your applaud, Andrea! ;-)
Hamilton Avatar
December 7, 2013 at 7:40 PM
hot Teddy congrats on win Shadow x smile hug
Kimathi Avatar
December 9, 2013 at 6:54 AM
I really appreciate your applaud madam! ;-)
Jones Avatar
December 7, 2013 at 7:37 PM
Nice...congratulations!
Kimathi Avatar
December 9, 2013 at 6:51 AM
Thank you Donna! ;-)
Guzzi Avatar
December 7, 2013 at 5:49 PM
Great work! ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Kimathi Avatar
December 9, 2013 at 6:45 AM
Thanks Debbie! Light & Love....
Puddifoot Avatar
December 7, 2013 at 4:58 PM
I really liked this one - a lovely mix of sensual imagery and quite explicit eroticism; everything about it just seemed right somehow...a couple of grammatical issues, but I suspect english may not be your first language, so I've allowed for that...congrats on your win in my contest! :)
Kimathi Avatar
December 9, 2013 at 6:42 AM
I appreciate your thorough review, Charlotte. It is an actual description of how I actually created my work n my mind. Thanks for your applaud! ;-)
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