Observatory

Outstretched are the heavens
Open infinity
Ornate spheres spin in line
Overwhelming wonders
Opalescent sparkles
Orbiting light's prime source
Organized with brilliance

4-3-2021
Pleiades O Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Kim Merryman
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Theraven Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 9:32 PM
Juliet, Love the Pleiades form in this fine poem 'Outer Space'. -Richard
Cohen Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 6:32 PM
"Overwhelming wonders!" Yes indeed. great stuff Juliet.
One Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 1:37 PM
I love this... brilliant..hope you are well.
Faulkner Avatar
April 5, 2021 at 2:56 PM
This glows with the vast beauty of the heavens, I especially like 'Opalescent sparkles' - should do well in the contest~
Wolf Avatar
April 4, 2021 at 7:35 PM
O, sO cOsmic! ~ gw
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