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Observation Post

Seagull lifed high
On gentle ocean breeze
Observation post

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Mary Meade Stephenson

Date: 12/28/2009 12:51:00 PM

Beautiful pic you have penned here in words. Wonderful job! Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my poetry. Also many thanks for your kind words of encouragement ...all is much appreciated! ave a blessed day~Mary

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 12/9/2009 7:24:00 PM

hot poem!!

Jan Harvey

Date: 12/8/2009 9:22:00 AM

Such beauty overhead, ocean gulls. Almost a picuture, I recall yesterday. Jan

L'Nass Shango

Date: 12/7/2009 6:57:00 AM

Powerful imagery ... the last line floats with so many meanings. Good write.

Abe Lopez

Date: 12/6/2009 6:49:00 PM

The wind becoming the observation post a great concept you've captured here .... very nice!

John Freeman

Date: 12/6/2009 6:34:00 PM

Nice one here Sara. neat observation post, the wind. Smile, Sincerely, Love, Moses

Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 12/6/2009 5:25:00 PM

I love this haiku. Makes me want to go to an observation booth!

James Fraser

Date: 12/6/2009 2:22:00 PM

Clever Haiku Sara >> James

Brian Strand

Date: 12/5/2009 11:58:00 PM

A good view indeed Sara.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.Have a blessed day

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/5/2009 8:03:00 PM

great one here very real! Light & Love

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 12/5/2009 4:29:00 PM

nicely penned haiku, thank you!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/5/2009 12:20:00 PM

Very stately image of the gull overseeing the seas, Sara. Awesome haiku! And as for your comment, I think Deborah SHOULD make a tape recording of all the holiday song entries. Maybe we can recruit Willie Nelson to sing them -- he's into special causes (LOL). Much love, Carolyn

Colleen Bono

Date: 12/5/2009 10:55:00 AM

So little,yet So big.good job.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/5/2009 9:11:00 AM

Very nice visual, Sara, as I read on this snowy New Jersey day... seagulls surround our seashore beaches only 30 minutes away from me but not today I'm afraid... they are probably hiding under the boardwalk.. enjoyed this haiku... blessings.. luv.. Linda-Marie, "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..

Juliane Thomas

Date: 12/5/2009 8:26:00 AM

What better place to be than lifted high on a breeze out over the ocean... Beautiful haiku, and thank you again for your kinds comments ~Juliane

Derrick Burton

Date: 12/5/2009 7:05:00 AM

enjoyed this piece of poetry.. so short and powerfula and i could see the ocean with my eyes and smell the ocean with my nose. Enjoy your day. :)

Thomas Stanton

Date: 12/5/2009 4:30:00 AM

storms to see vantage be the ocean is a major part of my life's experience... thank you Sara