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Obscure Chocolate Guilty

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Guilty Temptation so heavenly it's secret I hide Between linens, other obscure places, I always lie My heart refuses to relinquish control My pride To hell I know I'll ride because of the secret I hide inside I blame myself not having the willpower I’m saying goodbye My heart yearns for fulfillment with laughter wishing not to cry I love you, but I harming myself by keeping the lie I will make my tears dry never letting chocolate touch my lips g r a t i f i e d 3/17/2016 Poetry Contest :It's Time To 'Fess Up - Sponsored by: Lin Lane

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 3/22/2016 8:46:00 AM

Greetings Eve. Congrats for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)

Susan Gentry

Date: 3/22/2016 12:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the 'fess up contest! Enjoyed it.

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 3/21/2016 6:04:00 PM

Congratulations, Eva, on your win – and your honesty for your love of chocolate. It's also one of my favorite things, though I am diabetic. So I cheat now and then with the very best chocolate I can buy (70% cocoa), not cheap but every bite delicious. Thanks for reading my turkey poem. Best to you. / M

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 3/21/2016 7:47:00 AM

Congratulations on the placement of the contest Eve.

Wendy Rycroft

Date: 3/21/2016 6:19:00 AM

well written x

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/21/2016 3:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement with this sweet delight Eve! ;)

Probir Gupta

Date: 3/20/2016 9:05:00 PM

A chocolate poem! Congrats on your placement...

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/20/2016 7:38:00 PM

Eve, congratulations on your win in the 'guilty' contest, Nice write! Hugs, Sandra

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/20/2016 7:37:00 PM

Reads like a winner..Sweet way to go..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Lu Loo

Date: 3/20/2016 5:20:00 PM

Eve, congrats on your placement in the contest! I love this! :)-luloo

Lin Lane

Date: 3/20/2016 4:58:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement, Eve. yum yum yum!

Jan Allison

Date: 3/20/2016 4:51:00 PM

hee hee we share a birthday and a passion for chocolate - i too have a secret store lol:-) hugs jan xx many congrats on your win Eve:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/20/2016 2:21:00 PM

ok, Eve. ARe you trying to tell me you are giving up on your love? Hmmm, your next guilty poem is gonna be that you are guilty of lying because there is no way you can say NEVER. hahaha. Believe me, I have tried!! GREAT idea for your entry though.

Eve Roper
Date: 3/20/2016 2:44:00 PM

You read me like a book :) haha.. I did try to abstain for about three days and I couldn't do it anymore...

Constance La France

Date: 3/18/2016 8:00:00 PM

Eve, I love chocolate too, have been known to eat chocolate in bed under the blankies, I adore this write 7

Eve Roper
Date: 3/18/2016 8:05:00 PM

I don't let anyone into my stash :) I do have all other sweets all over but not my stash :)