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Obscure Chocolate Guilty

Guilty Temptation so heavenly it's secret I hide Between linens, other obscure places, I always lie My heart refuses to relinquish control My pride To hell I know I'll ride because of the secret I hide inside I blame myself not having the willpower I’m saying goodbye My heart yearns for fulfillment with laughter wishing not to cry I love you, but I harming myself by keeping the lie I will make my tears dry never letting chocolate touch my lips g r a t i f i e d 3/17/2016
Poetry Contest :It's Time To 'Fess Up - Sponsored by: Lin Lane
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Date: 3/22/2016 8:46:00 AM
Greetings Eve. Congrats for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 3/22/2016 12:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the 'fess up contest! Enjoyed it.
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Date: 3/21/2016 6:04:00 PM
Congratulations, Eva, on your win – and your honesty for your love of chocolate. It's also one of my favorite things, though I am diabetic. So I cheat now and then with the very best chocolate I can buy (70% cocoa), not cheap but every bite delicious. Thanks for reading my turkey poem. Best to you. / M
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Date: 3/21/2016 7:47:00 AM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Eve.
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Date: 3/21/2016 6:19:00 AM
well written x
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Date: 3/21/2016 3:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement with this sweet delight Eve! ;)
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Date: 3/20/2016 9:05:00 PM
A chocolate poem! Congrats on your placement...
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Date: 3/20/2016 7:38:00 PM
Eve, congratulations on your win in the 'guilty' contest, Nice write! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/20/2016 7:37:00 PM
Reads like a winner..Sweet way to go..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 3/20/2016 5:20:00 PM
Eve, congrats on your placement in the contest! I love this! :)-luloo
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Date: 3/20/2016 4:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement, Eve. yum yum yum!
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Date: 3/20/2016 4:51:00 PM
hee hee we share a birthday and a passion for chocolate - i too have a secret store lol:-) hugs jan xx many congrats on your win Eve:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/20/2016 2:21:00 PM
ok, Eve. ARe you trying to tell me you are giving up on your love? Hmmm, your next guilty poem is gonna be that you are guilty of lying because there is no way you can say NEVER. hahaha. Believe me, I have tried!! GREAT idea for your entry though.
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/20/2016 2:44:00 PM
You read me like a book :) haha.. I did try to abstain for about three days and I couldn't do it anymore...
Date: 3/18/2016 8:00:00 PM
Eve, I love chocolate too, have been known to eat chocolate in bed under the blankies, I adore this write 7
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/18/2016 8:05:00 PM
I don't let anyone into my stash :) I do have all other sweets all over but not my stash :)
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