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Obscure Chocolate Guilty

Guilty Temptation so heavenly it's secret I hide Between linens, other obscure places, I always lie My heart refuses to relinquish control My pride To hell I know I'll ride because of the secret I hide inside I blame myself not having the willpower I’m saying goodbye My heart yearns for fulfillment with laughter wishing not to cry I love you, but I harming myself by keeping the lie I will make my tears dry never letting chocolate touch my lips g r a t i f i e d 3/17/2016
Poetry Contest :It's Time To 'Fess Up - Sponsored by: Lin Lane
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Kimathi Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 8:46 AM
Greetings Eve. Congrats for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)
Gentry Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 12:06 AM
Congratulations on your win in the 'fess up contest! Enjoyed it.
Rigoler Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 6:04 PM
Congratulations, Eva, on your win – and your honesty for your love of chocolate. It's also one of my favorite things, though I am diabetic. So I cheat now and then with the very best chocolate I can buy (70% cocoa), not cheap but every bite delicious. Thanks for reading my turkey poem. Best to you. / M
Negron Flores Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 7:47 AM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Eve.
Rycroft Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 6:19 AM
well written x
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 3:06 AM
Congratulations on your placement with this sweet delight Eve! ;)
Gupta Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 9:05 PM
A chocolate poem! Congrats on your placement...
Haight Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 7:38 PM
Eve, congratulations on your win in the 'guilty' contest, Nice write! Hugs, Sandra
Kendrick Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 7:37 PM
Reads like a winner..Sweet way to go..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Scars Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 5:20 PM
Eve, congrats on your placement in the contest! I love this! :)-luloo
Lane Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 4:58 PM
Congratulations on your placement, Eve. yum yum yum!
Allison Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 4:51 PM
hee hee we share a birthday and a passion for chocolate - i too have a secret store lol:-) hugs jan xx many congrats on your win Eve:-) hugs jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 2:21 PM
ok, Eve. ARe you trying to tell me you are giving up on your love? Hmmm, your next guilty poem is gonna be that you are guilty of lying because there is no way you can say NEVER. hahaha. Believe me, I have tried!! GREAT idea for your entry though.
Roper Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 2:44 PM
You read me like a book :) haha.. I did try to abstain for about three days and I couldn't do it anymore...
La France Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 8:00 PM
Eve, I love chocolate too, have been known to eat chocolate in bed under the blankies, I adore this write 7
Roper Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 8:05 PM
I don't let anyone into my stash :) I do have all other sweets all over but not my stash :)
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