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She had the style of an itinerant individual. I'm continuously in such a problematic bully. Bashful and oblivious to the development of the festival. While I was wary of how I was doing, I was clumsy. Each passing second is being obliterated. As though it were inconsequential. As time passes to come, another test is related. Vice is never unpunished nor virtue charitable. A break from the limits of the setup traditions. But, they are trapped in the snare of accepted norms. Then again, redemption from one's transgressions. Also, freedom from the concerns of brainstorms. I've taken a stab at everything, but all in vain. Anything I need is intended for pain.

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Date: 9/24/2021 4:54:00 AM
A profound poem that desperately raises its voice for everyone to hear truth's claims, dearest friend, Lasaad! Well done!
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