V. Deepa Poet Free verse

Oblivious Dawn Enters Untimely

Thirsty rain smooches ground keenly,
sprinkles love to turn it fertile land.

Flowers blush gazing at their deep foreplay
and pretend to fall asleep 
providing privacy.

Wind flatters as a bracing feather blanket,
waltzing diligently to their melodic rhythm;
Whole night relishes playing hide and seek, 
willingly colliding with trees to create fun;
Wishing them good luck for intimate night,
with wavering smile carried aroma around..

birds and animals
are in slumber unaware ...
dawn enters early

Sep 16, 2020

Note:Writing challenge -Nature - Four in one Poetry 
Contest.
Sponsored by A dear heart -Constance La France.

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Constance La France September 29, 2020 at 1:34 PM Deepa, congratulations on your win in my Nature Four in One Challenge with this wonderful write, a FAV for me _Constance

Kim Rodrigues September 22, 2020 at 3:36 PM You seem to be in a sensual mood. Congratulations on your win!

Paula Goldsmith September 22, 2020 at 1:48 PM Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write/poem. I love the peace and beauty of the dawn. I can see myself there. Enjoy your win.......................

Jan Allison September 21, 2020 at 3:17 PM what lovely personification and imagery, Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx V. Deepa September 22, 2020 at 11:56 AM Oh ,glad to know you loved my poem dear Jan mam:-) Thankyou for the kind visit and warm appreciation.Take care.Much love:-)

Anne-Lise Andresen September 21, 2020 at 6:43 AM - Congratulations on your win, Deepa :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) V. Deepa September 22, 2020 at 11:54 AM Thankyou for your double visits and kind appreciation dear Anne mam:-)Take care.Much love:-)

Andrea Dietrich September 18, 2020 at 9:33 AM This is super nice!!! I just love personification like this . Soupmail. V. Deepa September 21, 2020 at 4:36 AM Hello Andrea mam, Thankyou for the warm appreciation.Am pleased to hear that you enjoyed my work:-) Have a beautiful day.Take care.:-)

Vijay Pandit September 16, 2020 at 1:59 PM Beautiful images you created, Deepa. I enjoyed the happy tone of your poem. V. Deepa September 17, 2020 at 11:26 AM Thankyou for the kind remarks dear Vijay sir:-) Am pleased to know that you enjoyed it.. Take care.Have a beautiful day:-)

Darlene De Beaulieu September 16, 2020 at 12:48 PM Hello Deepa, Some people are awake to to se the dawn. I have never seen the dawn because I am asleep. it must be beautiful to see it. Much love Darlene Darlene De Beaulieu September 17, 2020 at 3:02 PM Hello Deepa, I am fine thank you. One day I will awake up early to see the dawn. early to see the dawn come in. I am not a morning person. Much Love Darlene V. Deepa September 16, 2020 at 12:55 PM Yes.Dear Darlene mam.. It's lovely to view dawn.. I wish you would wake up early one day to view it..:-) It's long time writing poems..found a little time today to log in. How are you doing?. Enjoy your day..Take care.Much love:-)

Anne-Lise Andresen September 16, 2020 at 12:34 PM - Dear Deepa, four beautiful poems gathered in one bouquet ... love them :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) V. Deepa September 16, 2020 at 12:51 PM Thankyou dear Anne mam.. Glad you enjoyed my Muse:-) Best wishes for all your works too..Take care.Much love:-)