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Oblivious Dawn Enters Untimely

Thirsty rain smooches ground keenly, sprinkles love to turn it fertile land. Flowers blush gazing at their deep foreplay and pretend to fall asleep providing privacy. Wind flatters as a bracing feather blanket, waltzing diligently to their melodic rhythm; Whole night relishes playing hide and seek, willingly colliding with trees to create fun; Wishing them good luck for intimate night, with wavering smile carried aroma around.. birds and animals are in slumber unaware ... dawn enters early Sep 16, 2020 Note:Writing challenge -Nature - Four in one Poetry Contest. Sponsored by A dear heart -Constance La France.

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Constance La France

Date: 9/29/2020 1:34:00 PM

Deepa, congratulations on your win in my Nature Four in One Challenge with this wonderful write, a FAV for me _Constance

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/22/2020 3:36:00 PM

You seem to be in a sensual mood. Congratulations on your win!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/22/2020 1:48:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write/poem. I love the peace and beauty of the dawn. I can see myself there. Enjoy your win.......................

Jan Allison

Date: 9/21/2020 3:17:00 PM

what lovely personification and imagery, Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

V. Deepa
Date: 9/22/2020 11:56:00 AM

Oh ,glad to know you loved my poem dear Jan mam:-) Thankyou for the kind visit and warm appreciation.Take care.Much love:-)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/21/2020 6:43:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win, Deepa :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

V. Deepa
Date: 9/22/2020 11:54:00 AM

Thankyou for your double visits and kind appreciation dear Anne mam:-)Take care.Much love:-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/18/2020 9:33:00 AM

This is super nice!!! I just love personification like this . Soupmail.

V. Deepa
Date: 9/21/2020 4:36:00 AM

Hello Andrea mam, Thankyou for the warm appreciation.Am pleased to hear that you enjoyed my work:-) Have a beautiful day.Take care.:-)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/16/2020 1:59:00 PM

Beautiful images you created, Deepa. I enjoyed the happy tone of your poem.

V. Deepa
Date: 9/17/2020 11:26:00 AM

Thankyou for the kind remarks dear Vijay sir:-) Am pleased to know that you enjoyed it.. Take care.Have a beautiful day:-)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/16/2020 12:48:00 PM

Hello Deepa, Some people are awake to to se the dawn. I have never seen the dawn because I am asleep. it must be beautiful to see it. Much love Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/17/2020 3:02:00 PM

Hello Deepa, I am fine thank you. One day I will awake up early to see the dawn. early to see the dawn come in. I am not a morning person. Much Love Darlene

V. Deepa
Date: 9/16/2020 12:55:00 PM

Yes.Dear Darlene mam.. It's lovely to view dawn.. I wish you would wake up early one day to view it..:-) It's long time writing poems..found a little time today to log in. How are you doing?. Enjoy your day..Take care.Much love:-)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/16/2020 12:34:00 PM

- Dear Deepa, four beautiful poems gathered in one bouquet ... love them :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

V. Deepa
Date: 9/16/2020 12:51:00 PM

Thankyou dear Anne mam.. Glad you enjoyed my Muse:-) Best wishes for all your works too..Take care.Much love:-)