Oblivion

Hiding in the shadows dementia devastates; as sanity slowly begins slipping away. When your memory fails, life loses its meaning; and you become depressed; bewildered, and confused. Your heart morphs into a desolate derelict; a floundering vessel not even love can save. Hope's quickly depleted, for trust doesn't exist; only time remains true, in this facade of lies. And when reality's stranger than any dream; Alzheimer's tethers your soul to oblivion.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 5/14/2018 10:04:00 PM
Well penned, Emile.
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Date: 5/15/2018 8:38:00 AM
Thanks Line, I truly appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/24/2015 10:59:00 PM
Sorry that I previously missed replying to this contest being finished. Congrats on your well deserved win my friend.
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Date: 12/25/2015 11:34:00 AM
Thanks Robert, I appreciate your continued support. Emile.
Date: 12/20/2015 12:30:00 AM
Emile, Congrats on your win In Rob Carmack's Oblivion contest. Love ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/20/2015 12:45:00 PM
Thanks LINDA, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 12/19/2015 3:06:00 PM
EMILE, Congrats on your Oblivion WIN **SKAT**
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Date: 12/20/2015 12:44:00 PM
Thanks SKAT, I appreciate your visit. Emile.
Date: 12/11/2015 1:04:00 PM
Amazing write, Emile. Very deep and so sad and true. I have seen this happen among family and friends. I believe this gem will be on the winners list. 7+Fav, Sandra
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Date: 12/11/2015 5:25:00 PM
Thanks Sandra, I appreciate your visit and kind words of encouragement. Emile.
Date: 12/10/2015 2:07:00 AM
Beautiful in it's sadness, best wishes in contest.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 12/10/2015 9:28:00 AM
Thanks John, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 12/10/2015 12:13:00 AM
Emile, this is is breathtaking and emotional, a topic many wish not to face, but one we all must one day! A7
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Date: 12/10/2015 9:30:00 AM
Thanks Arthur, I appreciate your friendly words of encouragement. Emile.
Date: 12/9/2015 8:36:00 PM
Sad, but all too true for many Emile.
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Date: 12/10/2015 9:30:00 AM
Thanks John, I appreciate your visit. Emile.
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