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Oasis, Oblivion, Odyssey Contest   Sponsor: Constance La France

January 3, 2024

"If it's a human flaw to occasionally desire to live in oblivion, I plead guilty to my fault." Quote by Poet
I wish I could fade into a realm of oblivion even if it's just for a few moments in time. Or be unaware of the mountains I climb Long enough for my heart to heal from wounds it continues to feel If only I could recede into shadows of oblivion so sorrowful memories might vanish with me, or seep into the sea and set my mind free. I'm weary and my soul has become bleak trying to be rid of the past, I'm too weak. Let me slip into the darkened void of oblivion to wilt and wither like petals of a cut flower. I'd thank the gentle mercy of the wind's power to hide my jagged scars from prying eyes, but I cannot don a mask in life as a disguise. I would vanish in a raging storm of oblivion as my fate to disappear inside a nimbus cloud. I'd be quietly meek when thunder roars aloud and mingle my tears with pouring rain if I thought I had something to gain. Don't deny me my quest to be lost in oblivion. Never wake me from the beauty of my dreams. Let me linger in darkness because it seems I can shrink into a stupor of mediocrity... content to be abstruse; invisible in obscurity.

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Date: 1/17/2024 7:56:00 PM
The void of vibrant silence, yes. Beautifully penned, Lin, enjoyed. Warmest congratulations on your win.
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Date: 1/15/2024 7:21:00 AM
- Beautiful and deep feelings, Lin - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 1/15/2024 11:18:00 AM
Hi Anne-Lise and I appreciate your congrats and hugs!
Date: 1/14/2024 8:20:00 PM
"If only I could recede into shadows of oblivion so sorrowful memories might vanish with me" - An in-depth writing on Oblivion. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/15/2024 11:17:00 AM
Hi Chris, and thank you very much for your kind thoughts.
Date: 1/14/2024 4:19:00 PM
Lin, beautiful poem, and congratulations on your win in my contest, well done, Constance
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Date: 1/15/2024 11:17:00 AM
Thank you ever so much for your acknowledgement of my poem, Constance. I'm honored.
Date: 1/4/2024 9:43:00 AM
Beautiful poem. I can relate to your feelings.
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Date: 1/8/2024 5:59:00 AM
Thanks ever so much, Jay.
Date: 1/3/2024 10:29:00 PM
As we go through life we often encounter heavy storms and all we want to do is withdraw into ourselves to a place where we feel safe from the outside world and stay until the storm passes. Good luck in the contest Lin. Tom
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Date: 1/4/2024 7:38:00 AM
You're right, Tom. It's a haven we seek in those times. Thanks so much.
Date: 1/3/2024 3:42:00 PM
your poem spoke to me...how often do I think I just want to disappear into oblivion. On the surface, oblivion sounds so appealing with its lack of responsibility and lack of awareness. I discovered along time ago as you did, that oblivion is a form of mediocrity. I can't stomach that. Enough said. Needless to say, I enjoyed your poem. Am faving...have a splendid evening, hugs, Sara
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Date: 1/3/2024 3:56:00 PM
Sometimes it seems that a "Calgon, take me away moment" just won't do it. Thanks so much for your lovely thoughts, Sara. My night is cozy and I'm content. With Bill as a hubby, I'm sure you are, too.
Date: 1/3/2024 3:31:00 PM
So lovely Lin…..l understand that feeling very well….beautifully expressed! Debx
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Date: 1/3/2024 3:54:00 PM
Thank you, Deb. You're always offering me your smile with your comments. Hugs and ;-)

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