Obito's Immortal( Naruto Lovers)

Obito’s immortal

You wished you had more time with everyone
But life has taken that away
You protected your friend, defended him 
Stood below a falling rock
Your right side got crushed, you hardly feel it 

Never gave your friend a gift for becoming a jounin
But on the minutes of death, you thought of something
Something that is not a useless luggage 

You gave him your Sharingan!
A gift that you had not life to use twice
A gift that showed your loyalty

After you have hated your friend, after all the words he said
You became friends, he rescued you from all the bad guys
And you offered and gave in return your life, your Sharingan!

I can never believe the love
I can never imagine the friendship
I will always hate the fate

You have died; your friend has lived…
What rule does this follow?
The rule of God, the will of his that will stay…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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July 9, 2010 at 6:52 AM
wow powerful words,, this is like it's speaking like strongly,, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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