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" MIGHTY TIME " MY PHOTO, ©

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I salute you oh, mighty Time: My best friend, My worst enemy For To live without you is simply Unimaginable! Throughout my existence I have, unsuccessfully, struggled to accept Whatever you brought to me, Either it was a sweet smile Or a bitter tear with Equanimity Since I could not enjoy the one Without Suffering the presence of The other For This, you told me, is the order of things, This is what the heavens Decree, But I, a fool ignorant, resisted! Now, however, Older and wiser, an obedient child of yours, oh Time, I have finally become So as To abide by your universal rules Of growth and decay Without My tightened lips, a single complaint to pronounce! © Demetrios Trifiatis 24 July 2020

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Date: 7/24/2020 10:22:00 PM
Nice lessons learnt over time, Big brother:)
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/25/2020 9:25:00 AM
Thank you little sister. Hugs xxx
Date: 7/24/2020 7:53:00 AM
- Excellently written, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/24/2020 7:55:00 AM
You too kind my dearest friend, Anne-Lise. Thank you so much. Hugs xxx
Date: 7/24/2020 6:15:00 AM
It is time Demetrios to say to you that this piece is another of your magnificent creations. A lovely truth and perspective of time. Well thought of and Clever my friend... Blessings.
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Date: 7/24/2020 6:34:00 AM
Thank you indeed for your honest appreciation my dearest friend, Michael. Thank you for your gracious support. God bless you!
Date: 7/24/2020 4:57:00 AM
This is awesome--another one of your masterpieces my friend. I am saving this in my FAVES. Lovely flowers.
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Date: 7/24/2020 5:44:00 AM
Thank you so much for your generous comment and FAVE my dearest friend, Vijay. Have a wonderful weekend.
Date: 7/24/2020 2:26:00 AM
Time marches on regardless, it brings the good and the not so good, it's how we spend that time that counts and as we get older and wiser we realise how precious that time is. Thought provoking words Demetrios. Tom
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/24/2020 4:31:00 AM
Thank you for your precious visit a d comment my friend, Tom. Have a lovely weekend.

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