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For we know who's in charge.

Obedience

Koyaanisqatsi -
What monster thing chases man?
We feel life renewed.

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abuseblessingchangeconflictdeathhaiku

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Poet Destroyer A

February 3, 2016 at 7:39 PM

enjoyed this entry, good luck in the contest:) @-> LINDA <-@

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis

February 4, 2016 at 10:26 AM

I thank you.

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 3, 2016 at 8:39 AM

- A good one, Iris - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis

February 3, 2016 at 6:28 PM

Do you suppose it's a storm?

Robert Heemstra

February 3, 2016 at 8:25 AM

A very nice haiku even though I'm not familiar with that word, I know life has many storms. After every storm there is a feeling of renewal.

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis

February 3, 2016 at 6:21 PM

Thank for stopping by Robert. Koyaanisqatsi was the name of a movie I saw in New York back in the 70's. It was about life out of balance; respect shown to nature, plus more. It was short and more like some sort of documentary.

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