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Obedience

Obedience

Nonchalant workers
unfazed by nature’s vista
contently labour
accepting their condition;
ageless Mount Fuji silent.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Sambourne Avatar
August 29, 2022 at 8:28 AM
Nicely penned. I like the stoic resiliency of Mount Fuji, quiet, ignored, despite the clamor of workers about. Best wishes, Brian
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September 11, 2022 at 10:29 AM
Thank you for your comment and expressing your appreciation for Japan's Edo period of culture and art.
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