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Obedience Nonchalant workers unfazed by nature’s vista toil away content accepting their condition ageless Mount Fuji silent.

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Date: 8/29/2022 8:28:00 AM
Nicely penned. I like the stoic resiliency of Mount Fuji, quiet, ignored, despite the clamor of workers about. Best wishes, Brian
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Dennis Spilchuk
Date: 9/11/2022 10:29:00 AM
Thank you for your comment and expressing your appreciation for Japan's Edo period of culture and art.

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