Obama Clerihew

Barack Obama (Clerihew)

Chief Barack Obama
Had a white mama.
Now don’t have an attack,
But most think he is black.





10-6-12

~Fifth Place~
Seeking a Fresh Crop of Clerihews" Contest 
For Andrea Dietrich’s Contest Judged:  9/20/2016  Dietrich's "

Under the category of Poet....he is a poet but noone seems to know it!
My first and only attempt at trying to write a Clerihew
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Siko Avatar
April 16, 2014 at 9:11 AM
WOW! i never thought it that way, only a good writer can think the way you do, its great and mind opening. you such an amazing writer Connie, i want to be the first to say i #RESPECT you a ot
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November 21, 2012 at 8:12 PM
ConnieStopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*
Song Avatar
October 28, 2012 at 6:47 PM
And he distances himself from his white heritage as much as possible...read his book and u will find his words about his own heritage stunning...A great first attempt, Connie...I am impressed that u had perfect rhyme and whole- hearted wit! Great job! Congrats lady! gwendolen
Guzzi Avatar
October 25, 2012 at 11:46 AM
Yup a bigot will find a way to hate! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Brown Avatar
October 23, 2012 at 6:37 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem in Andrea's "Fresh Crop of Clerihews" contest Connie. Love, Carol
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October 23, 2012 at 3:01 AM
I can picture Brad Pit saying this in his Chanel No#5 commercial.
Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar
October 22, 2012 at 8:38 PM
A funny and great write for a first attempt, Connie! Please, go on with the clerihews! Congratulations on your win. Love, Hanitra
Johnson Avatar
October 22, 2012 at 10:06 AM
Nice one Connie. So nice to hear his name and not detect any party line. Congrats. P.S. Can't wait for this campain season to be over.
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October 22, 2012 at 9:54 AM
Very good Clerihew here Connie!Congrats on the win.
Susan Avatar
October 22, 2012 at 8:15 AM
ha! cute clerihew connie! congrats on your win :)
Palmer Avatar
October 22, 2012 at 5:51 AM
wonderful,congrats Connie
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October 21, 2012 at 12:24 PM
CONNIE, congratulations with your awesome win in Andrea's "Fresh Crop of Clerihews" contest.. enjoyed all her winners and the people they wrote about... always~ :-) PD"
May Avatar
October 21, 2012 at 8:43 AM
congrats on your win Connie....
Ryerson Avatar
October 21, 2012 at 6:50 AM
Ha- ha!... VERY clever Connie!...He isn't black??..To quote Mr. Bill....Oh noooooo!
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October 21, 2012 at 3:29 AM
CONGRATS CONNIE ON A GREAT WIN FOR A WITTY ON TARGET WRITE LUV .. HOPE ALL IS SUPER .. WE R BABY SITTING OUR NEW LITTLE GUY WHO IS UP AT 4 AM EST .. OH..
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 21, 2012 at 5:42 AM
So you are living on the east coast now, or just visiting? Congrats on your little one. Our g.daughter is 7 mos. now.
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October 20, 2012 at 10:19 PM
AWESOME first attempt, Connie. So glad you put this one in the contest and big congrats on your win in my contest. Obama is rather handsome too, don't you think? Soupmail.
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 21, 2012 at 5:44 AM
Yes, he is and has class!
Grisetti Avatar
October 20, 2012 at 8:40 PM
Just watched a bio of Obama tonight - his dad had at least three wives.
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October 9, 2012 at 8:26 AM
Excellent Clerihew my dear Connie. This is a winner for me. I have really enjoyed reading it. Thanks and have a nice day always! hugs:) Leonora
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October 6, 2012 at 10:40 AM
Connie, interesting, i had no idea... good luck in the contest .enjoyed your poem~ have yourself a nice day~ XOX *PD
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October 6, 2012 at 5:06 AM
Good written Connie - hope the "best" will win the elections. - Good luck in the contest - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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