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'oath To Start Anew'

the love they shared went through a dip
faltering and losing their grip
once stable now a sinking ship
all she had was his heart
she promised not to let it slip
buoyant for a new start...


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Contest: Rime Couee
6th Place

Copyright © Wilma Neels | Year Posted 2011

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/22/2011 12:51:00 PM AHA, one that I missed!! I think I am caught up on your page now, Wilma. I enjoyed this one and thanks for your several comments since yesterday. If you knew my life right now, you might take back what you said about the blonde guy I used to laugh. haha. Luv ya, andrea Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 7/13/2011 2:29:00 PM Many congrats on all your recent wins, Wilma : ) Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 7/12/2011 12:23:00 PM Hon, I'm so happy to see your poem in Dr. Ram's winners' circle. Much love and congratulations too, Carolyn Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 7/12/2011 7:09:00 AM Wilma, a nice ideal for a lovely presentation, Congratulations on your win. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 7/12/2011 5:25:00 AM Congratulations Wilma on your win in the "Rime Couee" contest of Dr. Ram Mehta. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 7/11/2011 2:47:00 PM Great rhyming Wilma. congratulations. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 7/11/2011 2:20:00 PM Congrats Wilma on your fantastic win with this new form and excellent words of expressive my friend.. luv your title ..oh so awesome luv.. Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 7/11/2011 2:03:00 PM My congratulations on this win in my contest, Wilma Login to Reply

Tim B Date: 7/7/2011 10:03:00 PM Indeed, rather inspirational. Love the flow, and you capture the strength needed to keep the ship sailing perfectly. "Write on good poet." -TimB Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 7/7/2011 1:25:00 PM The ships are sinking all around us, Wilma. It takes work and commitment to stay afloat in today's world. Beautifully written! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 7/7/2011 1:10:00 PM Great work with this form... Hope , love and peace is alll we want...just sometimes can't reach...love always Michael Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 7/7/2011 10:53:00 AM Hope is always a good thing! : ) This should do well, Wilma! Great job. Another short visit...miss my friends, soooo! Much love, Annalise Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 7/7/2011 10:38:00 AM I enjoyed this one Wilma..I think I really like this form..good luck..BG Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 7/7/2011 10:32:00 AM What a lovely write, Wilma. I hope your toes have warmed up! It's pretty warm here Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 7/7/2011 10:16:00 AM Excellent write Wilma.I think this is for Dr.Mehta's contest,Best wishes. Login to Reply

John Loving Iii Date: 7/7/2011 10:07:00 AM meaningful to me in ways. john Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 7/7/2011 8:23:00 AM Really like the hope you give in this write, missy! And so cool with the ending rhyme you used, :) Glad she got ahold of that heart ;) everybody deserves that second chance...mwahugs Login to Reply