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'oath To Start Anew'

the love they shared went through a dip faltering and losing their grip once stable now a sinking ship all she had was his heart she promised not to let it slip buoyant for a new start... 070720111445 Contest: Rime Couee 6th Place

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/22/2011 12:51:00 PM

AHA, one that I missed!! I think I am caught up on your page now, Wilma. I enjoyed this one and thanks for your several comments since yesterday. If you knew my life right now, you might take back what you said about the blonde guy I used to laugh. haha. Luv ya, andrea

Jack Horne

Date: 7/13/2011 2:29:00 PM

Many congrats on all your recent wins, Wilma : )

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/12/2011 12:23:00 PM

Hon, I'm so happy to see your poem in Dr. Ram's winners' circle. Much love and congratulations too, Carolyn

John Freeman

Date: 7/12/2011 7:09:00 AM

Wilma, a nice ideal for a lovely presentation, Congratulations on your win. Agape, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/12/2011 5:25:00 AM

Congratulations Wilma on your win in the "Rime Couee" contest of Dr. Ram Mehta. Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/11/2011 2:47:00 PM

Great rhyming Wilma. congratulations. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/11/2011 2:20:00 PM

Congrats Wilma on your fantastic win with this new form and excellent words of expressive my friend.. luv your title ..oh so awesome luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/11/2011 2:03:00 PM

My congratulations on this win in my contest, Wilma

Tim B

Date: 7/7/2011 10:03:00 PM

Indeed, rather inspirational. Love the flow, and you capture the strength needed to keep the ship sailing perfectly. "Write on good poet." -TimB

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/7/2011 1:25:00 PM

The ships are sinking all around us, Wilma. It takes work and commitment to stay afloat in today's world. Beautifully written! Love, Carolyn

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 7/7/2011 1:10:00 PM

Great work with this form... Hope , love and peace is alll we want...just sometimes can't reach...love always Michael

Audrey Haick

Date: 7/7/2011 10:53:00 AM

Hope is always a good thing! : ) This should do well, Wilma! Great job. Another short visit...miss my friends, soooo! Much love, Annalise

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 7/7/2011 10:38:00 AM

I enjoyed this one Wilma..I think I really like this form..good luck..BG

Jack Horne

Date: 7/7/2011 10:32:00 AM

What a lovely write, Wilma. I hope your toes have warmed up! It's pretty warm here

Kash Poet

Date: 7/7/2011 10:16:00 AM

Excellent write Wilma.I think this is for Dr.Mehta's contest,Best wishes.

John Loving Iii

Date: 7/7/2011 10:07:00 AM

meaningful to me in ways. john

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/7/2011 8:23:00 AM

Really like the hope you give in this write, missy! And so cool with the ending rhyme you used, :) Glad she got ahold of that heart ;) everybody deserves that second chance...mwahugs