Wilma Neels Poet Verse

'oath To Start Anew'

the love they shared went through a dip
faltering and losing their grip
once stable now a sinking ship
all she had was his heart
she promised not to let it slip
buoyant for a new start...


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Contest: Rime Couee
6th Place

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Andrea Dietrich July 22, 2011 at 12:51 PM AHA, one that I missed!! I think I am caught up on your page now, Wilma. I enjoyed this one and thanks for your several comments since yesterday. If you knew my life right now, you might take back what you said about the blonde guy I used to laugh. haha. Luv ya, andrea

Jack Horne July 13, 2011 at 2:29 PM Many congrats on all your recent wins, Wilma : )

Carolyn Devonshire July 12, 2011 at 12:23 PM Hon, I'm so happy to see your poem in Dr. Ram's winners' circle. Much love and congratulations too, Carolyn

John Freeman July 12, 2011 at 7:09 AM Wilma, a nice ideal for a lovely presentation, Congratulations on your win. Agape, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown July 12, 2011 at 5:25 AM Congratulations Wilma on your win in the "Rime Couee" contest of Dr. Ram Mehta. Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson July 11, 2011 at 2:47 PM Great rhyming Wilma. congratulations. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 11, 2011 at 2:20 PM Congrats Wilma on your fantastic win with this new form and excellent words of expressive my friend.. luv your title ..oh so awesome luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta July 11, 2011 at 2:03 PM My congratulations on this win in my contest, Wilma

Tim B July 7, 2011 at 10:03 PM Indeed, rather inspirational. Love the flow, and you capture the strength needed to keep the ship sailing perfectly. "Write on good poet." -TimB

Carolyn Devonshire July 7, 2011 at 1:25 PM The ships are sinking all around us, Wilma. It takes work and commitment to stay afloat in today's world. Beautifully written! Love, Carolyn

Michael J. Falotico July 7, 2011 at 1:10 PM Great work with this form... Hope , love and peace is alll we want...just sometimes can't reach...love always Michael

Audrey Haick July 7, 2011 at 10:53 AM Hope is always a good thing! : ) This should do well, Wilma! Great job. Another short visit...miss my friends, soooo! Much love, Annalise

Barbara Gorelick July 7, 2011 at 10:38 AM I enjoyed this one Wilma..I think I really like this form..good luck..BG

Jack Horne July 7, 2011 at 10:32 AM What a lovely write, Wilma. I hope your toes have warmed up! It's pretty warm here

Kash Poet July 7, 2011 at 10:16 AM Excellent write Wilma.I think this is for Dr.Mehta's contest,Best wishes.

John Loving Iii July 7, 2011 at 10:07 AM meaningful to me in ways. john

Kabuteng P.Ink K. July 7, 2011 at 8:23 AM Really like the hope you give in this write, missy! And so cool with the ending rhyme you used, :) Glad she got ahold of that heart ;) everybody deserves that second chance...mwahugs