Oasis Seen

From a winding black ribbon, I see a valley green. Through heat waves and dusty haze, an oasis seen. Tucked within the mountain range, no road leading in. Testament that the rain does play, in the desert wind. From a winding black ribbon, I turn westward. Through heat waves and dusty haze, I only look forward. Tucked within the mountain range, my stress does unravel. Testament that the rain does play, on the road less traveled From a winding black ribbon, I find my way home. Through heat waves and dusty haze, I traveled alone. Tucked within the mountain range, Off the beaten track Testement that the rain does play, even when I come back.
Written by: Paula Swanson Inspired by the contest: The Road Less Traveled Hosted by: A Rambling Poet Placement: 3rd

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 8/21/2010 8:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your third place finish!
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Date: 8/21/2010 6:03:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Paula
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Date: 8/20/2010 5:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Paula in Constance ~A Rambling Poet's~ contest "A Road Less Travelled~~". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/19/2010 7:41:00 PM
Congrats Paula on your winning poem in Constance's contest with ths wonderful piece.. a delight my friend.. with luv enjoy ciao..
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Date: 8/19/2010 7:15:00 PM
This is lovely and inspiring, Paula. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/19/2010 6:16:00 PM
Congratulations, Paula, on third place in my contest, The Road Less Travelled~~ This poem is so visually beautiful and has a dreamy, wonderful quality to it~~
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Date: 8/18/2010 9:21:00 AM
What a wonderful day to be reading poetry of others. I am so happy your poetry is among those I am reading this morning Paula and I wish you the best in Constance's contest.. I wish you as I wish all my fellow poets the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. It is a pleasure to me to read my fellow poets poetry. Love, Carol
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