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Oasis

Opalescent sky cast a pink glow As I walked slowly through the hourglass of time Somewhere in the middle of nowhere I found your footprints on the sand Spring water flowed across the desert of my heart.

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Jeremy Smith

Date: 5/10/2017 5:54:00 PM

Another beautiful piece, Charmaine nice job!!

Niall Fulham

Date: 5/2/2017 4:36:00 PM

Hi Charmaine , very romantic :)))big hugs

Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/19/2017 6:22:00 AM

Good Morning Beautiful Charmaine. You may take your bow with the Acrostic format. This form is hard to make flow do to its nature and form however you achieved the flow. Honestly. I also liked and enjoyed the fact that you did not keep the entry to the left. I sometimes also do that with this form. Thus for that I applaud you. The theme is beautiful and beyond. Enjoy the morning and day. Well done entirely and completely.

Anil Deo

Date: 4/18/2017 6:53:00 PM

That would do it, Charmaine - living waters!! Shalom (as this Acrostic earns a 7). Anil Deo

Tim Smith

Date: 4/18/2017 2:58:00 PM

This reads just like an hourglass ...I can see the different layers in each line...A fav Charmu

Chris Green

Date: 4/18/2017 2:50:00 PM

Oh how I wish I could write like you. Once again...I keep repeating myself but this is absolutely beautiful. I love everything about this poem. Sigh