Oasis

Opalescent sky cast a pink glow As I walked slowly through the hourglass of time Somewhere in the middle of nowhere I found your footprints on the sand Spring water flowed across the desert of my heart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Smith Avatar
May 10, 2017 at 5:54 PM
Another beautiful piece, Charmaine nice job!!
Ricci Avatar
April 19, 2017 at 6:22 AM
Good Morning Beautiful Charmaine. You may take your bow with the Acrostic format. This form is hard to make flow do to its nature and form however you achieved the flow. Honestly. I also liked and enjoyed the fact that you did not keep the entry to the left. I sometimes also do that with this form. Thus for that I applaud you. The theme is beautiful and beyond. Enjoy the morning and day. Well done entirely and completely.
Deo Avatar
April 18, 2017 at 6:53 PM
That would do it, Charmaine - living waters!! Shalom (as this Acrostic earns a 7). Anil Deo
Smith Avatar
April 18, 2017 at 2:58 PM
This reads just like an hourglass ...I can see the different layers in each line...A fav Charmu
Green Avatar
April 18, 2017 at 2:50 PM
Oh how I wish I could write like you. Once again...I keep repeating myself but this is absolutely beautiful. I love everything about this poem. Sigh
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