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Oasis

this dry wasteland longs for your shades beneath a copper of stars, while those flowing eyes become love’s oasis. Tanka 3 of Andrea Dietrich 27 March 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/2/2015 3:02:00 PM
Great thought!!Congrats!! Sara
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Date: 4/1/2015 6:10:00 AM
oh I see congratulations.. I love the copper stars.. :)! stunning!//olive eloisa
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Date: 3/29/2015 10:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win a 7 Blessings eve
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Date: 3/28/2015 11:46:00 PM
a lovely sensuous Tanka, Franco. Congrats. Mohan
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Date: 3/28/2015 12:51:00 PM
Lovely romantic tanka. Congratulations, Franco. Honored to share the tier with you. Kim :)
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Date: 3/28/2015 10:21:00 AM
How wonderful and lyrical !! A beautiful verse !! Congratulations !!
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Date: 3/28/2015 7:57:00 AM
Frank, congratulations on your wonderful win in the contest, a perfect 7 rating . . .
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Date: 3/28/2015 5:49:00 AM
beautifully crafted tanka - many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/28/2015 12:36:00 AM
this is gorgeous!! My only small critique would be where you left the preposition "beneath" at the end of line two. also, I think you meant "shade" although shades denotes colors, which is also a possibility. Anyway, this is so romantic. I loved it. congrats on my contest.
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Date: 3/26/2015 3:30:00 PM
An outstanding tanka!Charma
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