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Oasis

Peaceful oasis Natures abundance surrounds Delicate design

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/17/2009 4:57:00 PM
Sounds like a nice place to be.If or when I commit suicide it will be an accident so it won't hurt so much to my loved one's.Thank you for all the comments on my poems.Yes I entered the contest you told me about.Sorry to hear about your friend but I know just how she felt.
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Date: 11/10/2009 9:03:00 AM
"Delicate design"... this is an outstanding Haiku Lena! I look forward to my days off when I can spend some more reading time here. Thank you for the kind comment and your reading time! Hugs my friend. :)
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Date: 10/5/2009 4:04:00 AM
Congratulations on being on the hot poems list. Sara
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Date: 9/22/2009 9:26:00 PM
I like the serenity of this poem. It has me smiling. Thank you for sharing this uplifting view. Karen
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Date: 9/22/2009 8:13:00 PM
nature is in control in many ways!!!! very nice....
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Date: 9/22/2009 7:36:00 PM
gorgeous haiku! Lena!... and thanks for your kind comments...jim
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Date: 9/22/2009 11:35:00 AM
Excellent work Lolita, this one goes to my fav's...Raul
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Date: 9/22/2009 9:24:00 AM
Lena, this is such a warm, beautiful, soft, light Haiku. Outstanding write my friend. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/22/2009 8:07:00 AM
Mellow and beautiful haiku.
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Date: 9/22/2009 7:47:00 AM
A soft and gentle haiku...very beautiful! ~ Carrie
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Date: 9/22/2009 7:15:00 AM
Smiles "for" Lolita in this one! Excellent work. We all need to find an oasis, regardless of where we live. Great haiku, my friend! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/22/2009 6:41:00 AM
Thankful for the oasis. Brings relaxing thoughts. Keep writing. Sara
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