Oasis

"How sweet tasting those past memories were, never to forget every footstep taken holding your hand." quote by poet


A hazy image my eyes imagined,
like pebble thrown into a calm pool , chimed.
Numb, I relive a tingling elapsed time
On a desert oasis I saw you
As butterflies draped in rainbow silk bind
Ripples, moving away to see clear dream.
Graceful breeze's waft, spirals round, melting
Hazy, vitalizing safe endearing
Moment, upon golden waves of sunrise.
A love wandering in a far-off time.

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Anne-Lise Andresen

January 15, 2024 at 7:18 AM

- Beautiful and very sensitive, dear Eve - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs

Christuraj Alex

January 14, 2024 at 8:23 PM

"A love wandering in a far-off time" - A romantic writing. Congratulations!

Constance La France

January 14, 2024 at 4:22 PM

Eve, so sorry for your loss, such a beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, well done, Constance

Probir Gupta

January 7, 2024 at 9:21 AM

A poem of high standard. Deserves niche in classical poetry. Subtle emotions have been given powerfully verbal expression. Beautiful imagery lingers in the thoughts. Brilliant work, Eve. Congratulations!

Daniel Henry Rodgers

January 5, 2024 at 5:53 PM

Eve, your poem is an exquisite masterpiece that transcends time and emotion. The imagery you craft is vivid and mesmerizing, evoking a nostalgic longing that resonates deeply. The gentle flow of your words mirrors the delicate beauty of an oasis, weaving a tale of love and memory. Each line dances elegantly, capturing the essence of a cherished past. Your artistry with language creates a serene yet powerful portrayal of emotion and longing. Brilliantly penned! - Blessings Daniel!