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Oasis

                death colours' season
          takes a new torch to run with
        until legs resist
         ~thirsty crossing the desert
                looking for new oasis

Copyright © Maria Fernandez-Garcia | Year Posted 2023

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Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 11/20/2023 4:25:00 PM Hello Maria, the dessert has many types of oasis. Hugs. /Darlene/ Login to Reply Maria Fernandez-Garcia Date: 11/21/2023 3:10:00 PM You too my friend.xxx Love María Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 11/21/2023 6:05:00 AM Hello maria, good morning. That is what I thought. You also have a great day my friend. xxxx/Darlene/ Maria Fernandez-Garcia Date: 11/21/2023 12:41:00 AM Good morning my friend. Yes, you are right, the desert has different oasis. Have a great dayxxxx

Victor Buhagiar Date: 11/20/2023 1:11:00 AM An illusion? The desert produces them. Blessings Login to Reply Maria Fernandez-Garcia Date: 11/20/2023 1:45:00 AM Yes, easy after a long walking journey through a desert. Victor, thanks a lot. I appreciate it. Blessingsxxx

Sotto Poet Date: 11/19/2023 6:41:00 PM Maria, your Tanka is a splendid work of art, crafted with utmost skill and finesse, depicting the enchanting oasis and the arduous journey of quenching one's thirst amidst the barren desert. Login to Reply Maria Fernandez-Garcia Date: 11/20/2023 1:49:00 AM Good morning Sotto. I'm glad you enjoyed my tanka. Thank you so much for stopping and leaving your lovely comment. Have a blessed week!

Yann Rolland Date: 11/19/2023 5:23:00 PM oasis, is the name of the french site i use evryday to write french poetry, i love the beautiful and subtle imagery of your oasis, thanks a lot maria Login to Reply Maria Fernandez-Garcia Date: 11/19/2023 5:34:00 PM Oasis, le nom que fait nous en cherchent de la viexxx