Oasis


                death colours' season
          takes a new torch to run with
        until legs resist
         ~thirsty crossing the desert
                looking for new oasis

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Darlene De Beaulieu

November 20, 2023 at 4:25 PM

Hello Maria, the dessert has many types of oasis. Hugs. /Darlene/

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

November 21, 2023 at 3:10 PM

You too my friend.xxx Love María

Darlene De Beaulieu

November 21, 2023 at 6:05 AM

Hello maria, good morning. That is what I thought. You also have a great day my friend. xxxx/Darlene/

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

November 21, 2023 at 12:41 AM

Good morning my friend. Yes, you are right, the desert has different oasis. Have a great dayxxxx

Victor Buhagiar

November 20, 2023 at 1:11 AM

An illusion? The desert produces them. Blessings

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

November 20, 2023 at 1:45 AM

Yes, easy after a long walking journey through a desert. Victor, thanks a lot. I appreciate it. Blessingsxxx

Sotto Poet

November 19, 2023 at 6:41 PM

Maria, your Tanka is a splendid work of art, crafted with utmost skill and finesse, depicting the enchanting oasis and the arduous journey of quenching one's thirst amidst the barren desert.

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

November 20, 2023 at 1:49 AM

Good morning Sotto. I'm glad you enjoyed my tanka. Thank you so much for stopping and leaving your lovely comment. Have a blessed week!