Oasis

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death colours' season takes a new torch to run with until legs resist ~thirsty crossing the desert looking for new oasis

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/20/2023 4:25:00 PM

Hello Maria, the dessert has many types of oasis. Hugs. /Darlene/

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/21/2023 3:10:00 PM

You too my friend.xxx Love María

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/21/2023 6:05:00 AM

Hello maria, good morning. That is what I thought. You also have a great day my friend. xxxx/Darlene/

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/21/2023 12:41:00 AM

Good morning my friend. Yes, you are right, the desert has different oasis. Have a great dayxxxx

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/20/2023 4:10:00 AM

a lovely and soft poem that subtly reminds us that we all cross our metaphorical deserts searching for life's living waters in a new oasis. Stunning, Maria. Have to fave this one. Have a splendid day, Sara

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/20/2023 5:41:00 AM

Good morning Sara. Thank you for your kind words and the Fav. I'm glad you liked it. Have a blessed weekxxxx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/20/2023 1:11:00 AM

An illusion? The desert produces them. Blessings

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/20/2023 1:45:00 AM

Yes, easy after a long walking journey through a desert. Victor, thanks a lot. I appreciate it. Blessingsxxx

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/19/2023 6:41:00 PM

Maria, your Tanka is a splendid work of art, crafted with utmost skill and finesse, depicting the enchanting oasis and the arduous journey of quenching one's thirst amidst the barren desert.

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/20/2023 1:49:00 AM

Good morning Sotto. I'm glad you enjoyed my tanka. Thank you so much for stopping and leaving your lovely comment. Have a blessed week!

Yann Rolland

Date: 11/19/2023 5:23:00 PM

oasis, is the name of the french site i use evryday to write french poetry, i love the beautiful and subtle imagery of your oasis, thanks a lot maria

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/19/2023 5:34:00 PM

Oasis, le nom que fait nous en cherchent de la viexxx