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Oasis

Written: September 15, 2023 Pleiades 5 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May ________________________________________________________________ Onset calm palm date realm Oasis small green path Overwhelmed to the verge Onslaught in dense dryness Oppugn the sand from crops Oozing with zeal and poise Our parched and arid love
1st place contest winner
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Kendrick Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 2:55 AM
Creative way to go with this winner. Congratulations on your work being on the winners' list. Sara
Empress Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 7:49 AM
My friend whenver you win, i celebrate for you, you deserve it all! Brilliant pleiades so well presented. So happy for you! Congratulations
Rodrigues Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 5:00 AM
Overwhelmed to the verge…congratulations, Lasaad!
Alex Avatar
September 20, 2023 at 7:21 AM
Very beautiful writing. The pic too is very appropriate. Congratulations!
Andresen Avatar
September 20, 2023 at 4:07 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the Pleiades 5 Poetry Contest, Las :) -
George Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 9:53 PM
Great vocabulary and appropriate choice of words. The ending is quite striking and takes a different turn. Beautifully penned. Congratulations on your first place win, dear Lasaad.
May Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 5:40 PM
Very nicely penned Sotto, Congrats on your win
Bowring Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 7:51 AM
Extremely creative and stunning dear Sotto. Your command of the English language is awe inspiring. You write with such mastery, such feeling. Unique talent Sotto and with a generous heart too. Good luck in the contest. Blessings.
Andresen Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 7:13 AM
- Creatively described, Las ... lovely oasis :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
One Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 3:09 AM
A great selection of words carefully chosen from your vast vocabulary... Your poetry has no limits and that is shown here in your poetic oasis... nice use of oppugn and oozing... hope you do well with this one.
Buhagiar Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 2:29 AM
Methodical and original come to mind. A great Pleiades.
Empress Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 1:36 AM
As always your words are stunning and so unique and creative. I love how you’ve written for oasis in such a brilliant manner, in such poetic flow. Especially loved “ palm date realm” ah! How descriptive and tropical is that how you’ve described and painted imagery of a desert like oasis. Zeal and poise , i can see flowing through your lines. As always your words are beyond impeccable! Impressive pleiades that deserves all the accolades. Goodluck for the contest
Sharma  Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 1:22 AM
Oh dear Sotto, your Pleiades is hued with the most impeccable vocabulary that reflects poetic brilliance and I must say that you've so evocatively expressed such myriad emotions within such few words.. The whole desert ambience flowing with questioning that arises in one's heart when searching for answers.. Ah, so palpable.. "Our parched and arid love" Such a brilliant write this is! Best of luck for the contest -
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