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Written: September 15, 2023 Pleiades 5 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May ________________________________________________________________ Onset calm palm date realm Oasis small green path Overwhelmed to the verge Onslaught in dense dryness Oppugn the sand from crops Oozing with zeal and poise Our parched and arid love 1st place contest winner

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/23/2023 2:55:00 AM

Creative way to go with this winner. Congratulations on your work being on the winners' list. Sara

Ink Empress

Date: 9/21/2023 7:49:00 AM

My friend whenver you win, i celebrate for you, you deserve it all! Brilliant pleiades so well presented. So happy for you! Congratulations

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/21/2023 5:00:00 AM

Overwhelmed to the verge…congratulations, Lasaad!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 9/20/2023 7:21:00 AM

Very beautiful writing. The pic too is very appropriate. Congratulations!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/20/2023 4:07:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win in the Pleiades 5 Poetry Contest, Las :) -

Valsa George

Date: 9/19/2023 9:53:00 PM

Great vocabulary and appropriate choice of words. The ending is quite striking and takes a different turn. Beautifully penned. Congratulations on your first place win, dear Lasaad.

Joseph May

Date: 9/19/2023 5:40:00 PM

Very nicely penned Sotto, Congrats on your win

Christina Bowring

Date: 9/16/2023 7:51:00 AM

Extremely creative and stunning dear Sotto. Your command of the English language is awe inspiring. You write with such mastery, such feeling. Unique talent Sotto and with a generous heart too. Good luck in the contest. Blessings.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/16/2023 7:13:00 AM

- Creatively described, Las ... lovely oasis :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Silent One

Date: 9/16/2023 3:09:00 AM

A great selection of words carefully chosen from your vast vocabulary... Your poetry has no limits and that is shown here in your poetic oasis... nice use of oppugn and oozing... hope you do well with this one.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/16/2023 2:29:00 AM

Methodical and original come to mind. A great Pleiades.

Ink Empress

Date: 9/16/2023 1:36:00 AM

As always your words are stunning and so unique and creative. I love how you’ve written for oasis in such a brilliant manner, in such poetic flow. Especially loved “ palm date realm” ah! How descriptive and tropical is that how you’ve described and painted imagery of a desert like oasis. Zeal and poise , i can see flowing through your lines. As always your words are beyond impeccable! Impressive pleiades that deserves all the accolades. Goodluck for the contest

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/16/2023 1:22:00 AM

Oh dear Sotto, your Pleiades is hued with the most impeccable vocabulary that reflects poetic brilliance and I must say that you've so evocatively expressed such myriad emotions within such few words.. The whole desert ambience flowing with questioning that arises in one's heart when searching for answers.. Ah, so palpable.. "Our parched and arid love" Such a brilliant write this is! Best of luck for the contest -