Kim Rodrigues Poet Verse

O Wide-Eyed Baby Browns

O wide-eyed baby browns
pink lips curl, produce sucking sound
mother loosens her blouse, instinct
she rubs his ruddy cheek
he drinks deeply as her heart leaps

5/15/2019

Writing Challenge 2, May 2019, Lind68868

Sponsor - Dear Heart

Theme Chosen - A Living Scene

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Michelle Faulkner May 18, 2019 at 7:21 PM Such a tender, nurturing scene, very heartfelt, Kim- Kim Rodrigues May 20, 2019 at 12:49 PM Thank you, Michelle! :)

Gershon Wolf May 15, 2019 at 10:13 PM This is so precisely penned...I would have added 'daring' 20 years ago...OK, I can see my way to adding it now as well. (Daring, ok; 'shocking,' no). :) gw Kim Rodrigues May 16, 2019 at 5:42 AM I would say natural. Yet, I love your comment...lol

Panagiota Romios May 15, 2019 at 12:11 PM Truly, beautiful, Kim. Loved it. Panagiota Kim Rodrigues May 15, 2019 at 2:17 PM Thank you, Panagiota!

Caren Krutsinger May 15, 2019 at 11:10 AM A gorgeous scene, nothing as wonderful in this world. Kim Rodrigues May 15, 2019 at 11:11 AM Thank you!i loved nursing my kids...so bonding.