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O, unbidden rain I welcome you to my garden, the flowers are thirsty . . . . We have been w a i t i n g for you The cosmos, daisies and red roses are hanging their heads F A L L rain with glistening drops gentle And with deep love kiss each sweet petal and tender leaf The vines are reaching out their tendrils t w i n i n g and curling O, the pleasant petrichor scent, the delightful drip, dripping Can you hear the flowers s i n g i n g even a green frog yells out . . . Soothing and calming is this summer downpour, Under the tin roof of my gazebo, I listen to the score; Murmuring and whispering in my sadly dropping garden, Musical, the lovely melody of utter abandon; Ebbing and fading and then rebounding again, Reprising over and over, a soulful song beautiful. Rhapsodic and exuberant the pulsing sortie, Absolute and utter is my repose, completely; Impressive and dramatic the swaying foliage, Nourished and totally free is my spiritual muse. And it rained all night, becoming quite the storm. Sleep music on the roof of my home. I lay in bed warm and cozy, listening until my eyes drooped and closed. I awoke in the morning and the rain had passed but the streets were flooded and the rain was gushing from the storm runoffs. I went out to my garden and it was so tranquil and still. It seemed happy and to me it was a dripping rainforest. a garden d r i p p i n g leaves heavy with the wetness- after the rainstorm ________________________ June 5, 2016 Poetry/Free Verse/Acrostic/Haibun/O, Unbidden Rain Copyright Protected, ID 16-797-74-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, Rain sponsor, Eve Roper First Place

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Date: 8/16/2016 10:47:00 AM
This is work of a maestro!Each poem of yours is a masterpiece. Thanks for sharing your words!
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Date: 8/16/2016 6:25:00 AM
A garden dripping just like this poem is dripping in pleasure giving BW.
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Date: 8/15/2016 10:07:00 PM
Very creative and lovely, Broken Wings. Congrats on your fine placement in the contest. 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 8/15/2016 7:48:00 PM
Lovely poem, Broken Wings ! A lot of effort went into this one, so clever! Sleep music.....is a lovely way to put it !
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Date: 8/15/2016 7:35:00 PM
How clever, B. W., using multiple forms for your personal downpours. Congrats! :-)
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Date: 8/15/2016 5:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Broken Wings :) beautiful written ! Hug Eve
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Date: 8/15/2016 4:48:00 PM
Broken Wings, another remarkably penned poem dear lady :) congrats on your top placement in the Rain contest! :)-luloo
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Date: 6/12/2016 12:02:00 PM
lovethis - i love rain, no matter how often it rains here
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Date: 6/6/2016 3:45:00 AM
Beautiful, Constance:) I can hear the Rain falling drip, drip, drip:):)
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Date: 6/5/2016 7:31:00 PM
Broken Wings, just perfectly written so beautifully..good luck it looks like a winner to me lady :)-luloo
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