O' the Many Things Brighter Stars Have Seen

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Robert J. Lindley, 4- 23-2019
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Note: This new sonnet born from first stanza comment made on my having read both Nina's blog titled, What Rhymes 2: Cross-Border Disorder and then my immediate reading of 
M.L. Kiser's new poem, titled, "Stars Above". 
I got started writing and I simply could not stop.....
Dedicated to you my friends , Nina Parmenter and M.L. Kiser- because your words given and sweet verses inspired the creation of this new piece.

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Total # Syllables:140
Total # Words:104

O' The Many Things Brighter Stars Have Seen

O' the many things brighter stars have seen
 through the long ages of our hopes and regrets
 lives, loves, losses, and all the in between
 all of the all, humanity begets!

O' the sights, lovers basking in moon light
 sweet memories that one may think divine
 under star-lite gaze, its Heavenly sight
 dearest kisses, signaling all is fine.
 
O' the grace felt in soft, gentle night's breeze
 its healing power to heart touch and save
 begs romance that sings, blossoms into ease
 passion's truth, serenity's path it paves.
 
O' that life would bring its happiness true
With smallest of hope within me or you.

Robert J. Lindley, 4- 23-2019
Sonnet 

Note: This new sonnet born from first stanza comment made on 
my having read both Nina's blog titled, What Rhymes
2: Cross-Border Disorder and then my immediate reading of 
M.L. Kiser's new poem, titled, "Stars Above". 
I got started writing and I simply could not stop.....
Dedicated to you my friends , Nina Parmenter and M.L. Kiser
because your words given and sweet verses inspired
the creation of this piece.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 4/24/2019 6:41:00 PM
You are a part of a group of poets whose poems will last and be read long after they are gone.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 4/24/2019 7:08:00 PM
My great friend, thank you for such inspiring and very kind words! This came about as a very inspired piece. And was my honor to write and post it and I hope it serves very well its readers....
Date: 4/24/2019 5:47:00 PM
Your poetry is a fount of inspiration, Robert! a profusion we learn from.. a fine soul whose beauties touch hearts.. and whose pen of such sensitivity to get inspired.. an illuminating Sonnet! You amaze with your perceptive poetry! A fave.. Warmest regards. Blessings.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 4/24/2019 5:59:00 PM
Again, thank you my dear friend. This piece is truly an inspired one. The verses came to me much like drinking cool water on a hot summer day. I love it when that happens and the poetry Gods smile upon we weak and tooooooo oft wandering in the vast and foreboding wilderness mere mortals..
Date: 4/24/2019 2:48:00 PM
I love it Robert. This kind of poetry brings lovers closer. Beautiful my friend! xxoo
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Robert Lindley
Date: 4/24/2019 2:54:00 PM
Thank you my dear friend. Your wonderful poetry has inspired me today to start a romantic poem-first stanza now completed. May take a bit to ever get completed, as I have 7 poems started as of right now and two other collaborations ongoing.
Date: 4/24/2019 1:00:00 PM
I am not sure what to say...first, thank you, Robert, I feel honored. Second, this is beautiful; you are a kind hearted friend.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 4/24/2019 2:03:00 PM
My fine friend, it is I that must thank you for the inspiration your poem gave me. What started out as just a 4 verse reply(stanza) inspired by your poem, turned into a creative and much inspired finished sonnet.
Date: 4/24/2019 7:35:00 AM
Amazing how quickly you can give shape and sound to beautiful sonnets like this poem. A true sign of an accomplished writer...you certainly are! Well done, Robert.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 4/24/2019 8:07:00 AM
Thank you so very much, my good friend. Your very kind words are a gift to me this glorious and beautiful morning..
Date: 4/23/2019 11:26:00 PM
A heartfelt and very well crafted sonnet, my friend; terrific write.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 4/24/2019 2:02:00 AM
Thank you my friend. I am glad that it suddenly struck me to compose the first stanza as a comment to M.L. Kiser's poem. I got started and couldnt stop. Sometimes when driving, I may think of verses or a first stanza and I pull over to be able to safely jot it down. Kind of crazy-huh? lol
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