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O, Sun

O, Sun Take my soul and burn it into your belly; purify it, 'til no more impurities of pain and worry are visible in it. O, Sun Make me to glow like you do; shining in everyone's life, as you shine on us......

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Date: 9/16/2015 2:04:00 AM
Wonderful write n win Teddy! Big Congrats ! Love the positive way u describe the mighty sun!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/19/2015 5:35:00 PM
Thank you so much Dr. Upma! *^_^*
Date: 9/15/2015 2:19:00 PM
Teddy, nice win. SKAT
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/15/2015 4:43:00 PM
Thank you Skat! *^_^*
Date: 9/14/2015 9:06:00 PM
I really liked this, I wish it could go on longer! Thank you for sharing it in my contest! :)
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/15/2015 4:41:00 PM
Thank you Casarah! *^_^*
Date: 2/6/2014 1:10:00 PM
- Your poem glows, Teddy - lovely written! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/7/2014 2:50:00 AM
Thanks Anne! ;-) <3 <3

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