Teddy Kimathi Poet Free verse

O, Sun

O, Sun

Take my soul
and burn it into your belly;
purify it, 'til no more impurities
of pain and worry are visible in it.

O, Sun

Make me to glow
like you do;
shining in everyone's life,
as you shine on us......

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 16, 2015 at 2:04 AM Wonderful write n win Teddy! Big Congrats ! Love the positive way u describe the mighty sun! Teddy Kimathi September 19, 2015 at 5:35 PM Thank you so much Dr. Upma! *^_^*

Skat A September 15, 2015 at 2:19 PM Teddy, nice win. SKAT Teddy Kimathi September 15, 2015 at 4:43 PM Thank you Skat! *^_^*

Casarah Nance September 14, 2015 at 9:06 PM I really liked this, I wish it could go on longer! Thank you for sharing it in my contest! :) Teddy Kimathi September 15, 2015 at 4:41 PM Thank you Casarah! *^_^*

Anne-Lise Andresen February 6, 2014 at 1:10 PM - Your poem glows, Teddy - lovely written! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Teddy Kimathi February 7, 2014 at 2:50 AM Thanks Anne! ;-) <3 <3