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Her hair was long a scraggly mess Maggie O’Shea flaunting a flimsy dress Of shiny silky satin sheen In bright vivid emerald green Flashing her smile ever so sincere Asked for a big green stein of beer After all it was St. Paddy’s Day She wouldn’t have it any other way AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Posted on December 1, 2019

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Constance La France

Date: 12/9/2019 10:12:00 PM

Line, a delightful fun green dress poem, I think it is great, a winner in my view !

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/10/2019 12:59:00 AM

LOL thanks, Constance. Most appreciated.

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 12/7/2019 5:58:00 PM

Hello Line ... green beer. Does it still give a hangover? The Irish certainly know how to celebrate on St Pats day as Maggie did - thanks Line - Lindsay

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/7/2019 11:45:00 PM

Yes the Irish certainly know how to party! Go Maggie Go.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/5/2019 5:30:00 AM

She sounds MARVELOUS!

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/5/2019 8:26:00 AM

LOL thanks, Caren.

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 12/1/2019 9:30:00 PM

Line, this delightful write is bound to be at the top of the winner's list! Splendid! Glad you liked the Alexa write. Its fictional and I don't even own an Alexa for fear it would sass and argue with me - ha! Bob

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/2/2019 12:29:00 AM

Thanks, Robert. I have an Alexa . I can assure your it is well behaved.