"o Heavenly Father, the God"

O god! Why community raises:
Where are you?
Show thy supernatural powers.
Why don’t you visible to us?

I had a belief that,
No one had ever seen you.
But, I can witness you, my lord.
You’re my spirit and my hope.

Deity! Why do I undergo?
That I am born alone,
So as to I sometimes, lose faith in you.
My heart beats fast enough.

O my divinity, I honestly believe,
In my hallucinations
You will react to my queries.
I trust you, the mania I shout.

In the cosmic universe,
Whether you will come or not
I bet, you will send an angel, certainly,
To survey me and answer query

Inhabitants depict you through,
Different pictures in diverse religions.
Sorry to them, thy supremacy can be seen 
In terms of thy creations

Thy grin is the moon brightening the heavens.
Thy anger is the sea waves razing the shore.
Thy help is the poor getting meals twice.
Thy sorrow is someone’s death.

My Idol! I have seen people,
At the time of need, crying and pleading.
Reply, how many devotees are here,
Who thank you for awarding happiness?

Answer nation:
If you believe in god’s creation,
You splurge huge money in front of scenic god.
Offering a lone coin to poor doesn’t consider god?

O heavenly father, once I want to add
In final, bleed me for a while in my existence.
So that the scatter sins flow from me,
To thy forgiving sea whose depth is judged by thee.   


A devotee’s prayer to lord,
-Shrishty Shrivastava
-10th standard

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 7/23/2010 6:08:00 AM
thanks carol :-)
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Date: 7/21/2010 11:54:00 AM
Here I sit with lots to do,....... but.......I would rather read poetry written by you. Wishing you a day filled with inspiration Shrishty. Love, Carol
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